[CRISP-TEAM] Document status inside the document
apb at cequrux.com
Sun Jan 11 08:39:23 CET 2015
I suggest adding a paragraph of document status inside the document,
in between the heading "Draft Response to the Internet Coordination
Group Request for Proposals on IANA from the RIR community" and the
fiste heading "1. Proposal Type". It could say who wrote the document,
and which version this is.
I note that the ICG RFP uses number 0, not 1, in the heading
"0. Proposal type", and I think we should do the same.
I also think that the title would be better is we moved "from the RIR
community" closer to the beginning.
So, I suggest that the top of our document should say something like
Draft Response from the RIR community
to the Internet Coordination Group Request for Proposals on IANA
This document is a response from the Internet addressing community
to the ICG Request for Proposals. It was prepared by the CRISP Team,
which was established by the five Regional Internet Registries
(RIRs) specifically for the purpose of producing this document.
This is the second draft, published on 8 January 2015.
0. Proposal type
--apb (Alan Barrett)
More information about the CRISP