[CRISP-TEAM] [NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments

Izumi Okutani izumi at nic.ad.jp
Fri Jan 9 03:29:09 CET 2015


CRISP Team,


Paul Wilson has offered to send on our behalf, so this is what I will 
ask him to share with ICG Chair (and the ICG if appropriate).


Izumi

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Dear Alissa,


I would like to share the status of developing the Internet numbers 
community's response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA 
Stewardship Coordination Group (ICG).

As you are aware, the draft response has been prepared by the 
Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal (CRISP) team, based on its 
role to integrate the input from each of the 5 RIR regions and finalize 
the initial RIR submission to the ICG, in response to the RFP.

The key dates in developing the response from the number resources 
communities are as below, and we are pleased to share that our work is 
currently in progress as scheduled.

   Key dates:
     First draft comments close: 5 Jan 2015
     Second draft to be published: 8 Jan 2015
     Second draft comments close: 12 Jan 2015
     Final proposal to be sent to ICG: 15 Jan 2015

We are now calling for the final comments from the global number 
resources community on the <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list, for the 
second version of the draft published on 8th Jan 2015.

Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including the draft 
response to the ICG (all versions including outdated), recordings, 
minutes and agendas of all CRISP teleconferences and a public archive of 
the internal CRISP team mailing list, are available at: 
https://nro.net/crisp-team

Please feel free to me know if you have any questions about the response 
to be submitted to the ICG for the number resources component of the 
IANA transition.



Best Regards,
Izumi Okutani
Chair, The Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal Team (CRISP Team)





On 2015/01/09 6:47, Izumi Okutani wrote:
> Thanks Nurani for consulting Patrik F��ltstr��m. Helpful to know!
>
> So do you Nurani or anyone know where would be the best place I send
> this to, to reach ICG chair?
>
> Izumi
>
> On 2015/01/09 4:56, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>> Ok thanks Izumi. After having consulted with another ICG member
>> (Patrik F��ltstr��m), I suggest that we communicate where we are in
>> the timeline to the chair, but that we do not forward the actual draft
>> at this point.
>>
>> As you say, it can possibly create confusion and it may be unclear
>> what the purpose is. (We are not seeking input from the ICG on the
>> draft.)
>>
>> Nurani
>>
>> On 8 jan 2015, at 18:27, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>
>>> I see, understood. If that's what's requested by an ICG member I suppose
>>> we don't need to worry about the confusion.
>>>
>>> I am confirming with Paul Wilson as an ICG member, including wehre to
>>> send so I'll wait for his response.
>>>
>>> Thanks for bringing it up Nurani.
>>>
>>>
>>> Izumi
>>>
>>> On 2015/01/09 2:18, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> On 8 jan 2015, at 17:41, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> May I suggest that we also communicate this to the ICG Chair in
>>>>> addition to the IETF and names communities?
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Sure but just want to confirm whether this doesn't cause confusion we
>>>>> are submitting the final draft.
>>>>>
>>>>> If this is fine as long as we explain this is not the final version, I
>>>>> am happy to do that.
>>>>>
>>>>> Let me double check on this.
>>>>
>>>> Apparently it was a suggestion from one of then ICG members. Which
>>>> is why I suggested it. But personally I don't feel particularly
>>>> strongly about it.
>>>>
>>>> Nurani
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Izumi
>>>>> PS: I feel I'm so much supported by CRISP Team members to lead to
>>>>> positive progress but thanks for those words!
>>>>>
>>>>>> On 2015/01/09 1:29, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>>>>>> Thank you Izumi for your very competent steering of this group.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> May I suggest that we also communicate this to the ICG Chair in
>>>>>> addition to the IETF and names communities?
>>>>>>
>>>>>> All the best,
>>>>>> Nurani
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 8 jan 2015, at 17:26, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> CRISP Team,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The announcement sent out to the IANAXFER list.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Many thanks for working on this and great work by Michael in
>>>>>>> compiling
>>>>>>> all the feedback!
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thank you also for getting together for the call today, it was
>>>>>>> really
>>>>>>> helpful we did it, and appreciate Nurani for suggestion this.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> If I don't hear any concerns in the next five minutes, I'll also
>>>>>>> share
>>>>>>> to the IETF and names communities, as mentioned earlier.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Talk to you all again tomorrow at UTC13:00 9th Jan.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Regards,
>>>>>>> Izumi
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> -------- Forwarded Message --------
>>>>>>> Subject: [NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship
>>>>>>> Proposal: Final Call for Comments
>>>>>>> Date: Fri, 09 Jan 2015 01:21:08 +0900
>>>>>>> From: Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp>
>>>>>>> To: ianaxfer at nro.net <ianaxfer at nro.net>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Dear colleagues,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
>>>>>>> response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship
>>>>>>> Coordination Group (ICG).
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA
>>>>>>> Stewardship
>>>>>>> Proposal (CRISP) Team, with considerations of feedback received
>>>>>>> from the
>>>>>>> global community on <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> We have incorporated the following key points in the second draft:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>   - Additional description on contract details, review committee and
>>>>>>>     intellectual property rights
>>>>>>>   - Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI.
>>>>>>>     Community Process for more clarity
>>>>>>>   - No changes are made to key elements of the proposal
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
>>>>>>> <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of 5th Jan
>>>>>>> 2015, and
>>>>>>> would now like to make the final call for comments from the global
>>>>>>> community on the draft proposal, before submitting to the ICG.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Second Draft proposal:
>>>>>>> ------------------------
>>>>>>> Clean Version  :
>>>>>>> <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Redline Version:
>>>>>>> <http:/www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015 23:59 UTC
>>>>>>> Feedback should be sent to         : <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:
>>>>>>> ------------------------------------------
>>>>>>> You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and
>>>>>>> proposed the CRISP Team positions at:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>    <http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Key dates:
>>>>>>> -----------
>>>>>>>    Second draft to be published        :  8 Jan 2015
>>>>>>>    Second draft comments close        : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC
>>>>>>>    Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> How to Engage in Discussions:
>>>>>>> -----------------------------
>>>>>>>   All global discussions, for the CRISP team to consider as
>>>>>>> community
>>>>>>>   feedback, will be conducted at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>>>>>>>   All the CRISP Team discussions are open to observers.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Next Step:
>>>>>>> -----------
>>>>>>>   In developing the final draft based on further feedback, the CRISP
>>>>>>>   Team will ensure it has completed considerations of all
>>>>>>> substantial
>>>>>>>   issues raised by the global community, which are compiled in the
>>>>>>>   published issues list. The proposal will only incorporate
>>>>>>> issues that
>>>>>>>   the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the
>>>>>>>   community.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> References:
>>>>>>> ------------
>>>>>>> * Discussions by the CRISP Team
>>>>>>>     Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including
>>>>>>> recordings,
>>>>>>>     minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
>>>>>>>     public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
>>>>>>>     available at:
>>>>>>>     https://nro.net/crisp-team
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> * Other links:
>>>>>>>   - The ICG request for proposals:
>>>>>>>    <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>   - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
>>>>>>>     <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>   - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
>>>>>>>     <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
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