[CRISP-TEAM] Fwd: [NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments

[Nurani Nimpuno]

> On 8 jan 2015, at 17:41, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
> 
> 
>> May I suggest that we also communicate this to the ICG Chair in
> addition to the IETF and names communities?
> 
> 
> Sure but just want to confirm whether this doesn't cause confusion we
> are submitting the final draft.
> 
> If this is fine as long as we explain this is not the final version, I
> am happy to do that.
> 
> Let me double check on this.

Apparently it was a suggestion from one of then ICG members. Which is why I suggested it. But personally I don't feel particularly strongly about it. 

Nurani


> 
> 
> Izumi
> PS: I feel I'm so much supported by CRISP Team members to lead to
> positive progress but thanks for those words!
> 
>> On 2015/01/09 1:29, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>> Thank you Izumi for your very competent steering of this group.
>> 
>> May I suggest that we also communicate this to the ICG Chair in addition to the IETF and names communities?
>> 
>> All the best,
>> Nurani
>> 
>>> On 8 jan 2015, at 17:26, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>> 
>>> CRISP Team,
>>> 
>>> 
>>> The announcement sent out to the IANAXFER list.
>>> 
>>> Many thanks for working on this and great work by Michael in compiling
>>> all the feedback!
>>> 
>>> Thank you also for getting together for the call today, it was really
>>> helpful we did it, and appreciate Nurani for suggestion this.
>>> 
>>> If I don't hear any concerns in the next five minutes, I'll also share
>>> to the IETF and names communities, as mentioned earlier.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Talk to you all again tomorrow at UTC13:00 9th Jan.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Regards,
>>> Izumi
>>> 
>>> 
>>> -------- Forwarded Message --------
>>> Subject: [NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship
>>> Proposal: Final Call for Comments
>>> Date: Fri, 09 Jan 2015 01:21:08 +0900
>>> From: Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp>
>>> To: ianaxfer at nro.net <ianaxfer at nro.net>
>>> 
>>> Dear colleagues,
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
>>> response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship
>>> Coordination Group (ICG).
>>> 
>>> This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship
>>> Proposal (CRISP) Team, with considerations of feedback received from the
>>> global community on <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>>> 
>>> We have incorporated the following key points in the second draft:
>>> 
>>>  - Additional description on contract details, review committee and
>>>    intellectual property rights
>>>  - Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI.
>>>    Community Process for more clarity
>>>  - No changes are made to key elements of the proposal
>>> 
>>> The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
>>> <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of 5th Jan 2015, and
>>> would now like to make the final call for comments from the global
>>> community on the draft proposal, before submitting to the ICG.
>>> 
>>> Second Draft proposal:
>>> ------------------------
>>> Clean Version  :
>>> <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>
>>> 
>>> Redline Version:
>>> <http:/www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control>
>>> 
>>> The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015 23:59 UTC
>>> Feedback should be sent to         : <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list
>>> 
>>> Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:
>>> ------------------------------------------
>>> You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and
>>> proposed the CRISP Team positions at:
>>> 
>>>   <http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015>
>>> 
>>> Key dates:
>>> -----------
>>>   Second draft to be published        :  8 Jan 2015
>>>   Second draft comments close        : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC
>>>   Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015
>>> 
>>> How to Engage in Discussions:
>>> -----------------------------
>>>  All global discussions, for the CRISP team to consider as community
>>>  feedback, will be conducted at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>>>  All the CRISP Team discussions are open to observers.
>>> 
>>> Next Step:
>>> -----------
>>>  In developing the final draft based on further feedback, the CRISP
>>>  Team will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial
>>>  issues raised by the global community, which are compiled in the
>>>  published issues list. The proposal will only incorporate issues that
>>>  the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the
>>>  community.
>>> 
>>> References:
>>> ------------
>>> * Discussions by the CRISP Team
>>>    Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>>>    minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
>>>    public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
>>>    available at:
>>>    https://nro.net/crisp-team
>>> 
>>> * Other links:
>>>  - The ICG request for proposals:
>>>   <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
>>> 
>>>  - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
>>>    <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
>>> 
>>>  - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
>>>    <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
>>> 
>>> 
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