[CRISP-TEAM] 2ND CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft - Updated 1440UTC

[Alan Barrett]

On Thu, 08 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>Thank you very much for the updated version Michael! Excellent work.
>
>One minor correction:
>
>"III.A. The elements of this proposal are as follows:
>(1)  ICANN to continue as the IANA functions operator on number resources;
>(2)  Intellectual property rights (IPR) related to the provision of the IANA services stay with the community;
>(3)  Contract and service level agreement with the IANA functions operator on"
>
>Replace last bullet with:
>"(3)  Service level agreement with the IANA functions operator on"
>
> (Comment: I note that you remove the "Contract and" later in the 
> text in the title "III.A.3. Service level agreement with the 
> IANA functions operator on number resources", so this is just 
> tidying that up so it matches.)

I agree.

--apb (Alan Barrett)