[CRISP-TEAM] 2ND CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft - Update

[Michael Abejuela]

Team,

I am combing through the email correspondence and so far have edited the 2nd proposal draft as follows:

Changes made:

I.C.  Provision of reverse DNS services in “IN-ADDR.ARPA” and “IP6.ARPA” domains may also require interaction with the .ARPA zone registry.

Is a change to ii. Description of Serviced Provided by the IANA Operator to RIRs also required for consistency?

II.B.2 – revision to section “ICANN has historically provided IANA service…"

III.A.3 – removed “Contract and”

III.A.3 – revised “following principles” to “principles listed below”

III.A.3 – included text to the preamble immediately preceding the principles section "While there are no concrete needs or plans at this point, the NRO EC may in the future determine that the IANA functions related to number resources should be transferred to a different contractor.”

III.A.3.ii – revision as suggested

ii. Description of Serviced Provided by the IANA Operator to RIRs

Principle:
The IANA Operator will maintain the global Internet number resource registries.  The IANA Operator will distribute Internet number Resources to the RIRs in accordance with the specific processes and timelines described in this section of the agreement.  The IANA Operator will delegate subdomains below the IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA domains in accordance with the allocation of IPv4 and IPv6 addresses.

V.E – revised per Nurani’s suggestion – clarification “This proposal does not replace….”

VI – regional process formatting updates suggested by Nurani - (AFRINIC “setup” to “set up”; removal of hard breaks)
- also, removed the timeline graphic and revised text immediately below to reflect substance of the timeline graphic in text form.  Much of it was already covered by LACNIC but I supplemented with specific time duration references to capture the spirit of the graphic.

Open Items

Any agreement on modifications to the Review Committee text?

Should we remove the jurisdiction text as suggested by Paul?


Please let me know if I’ve missed anything on the call.  I am hopping on now.

Thanks!
-Michael

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Michael R. Abejuela
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