[CRISP-TEAM] 2ND CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft - CRISP Review

[Izumi Okutani]

On 2015/01/08 20:10, Alan Barrett wrote:
> On Thu, 08 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>> ----
>> (*) Suggested editorial change:
>> ----
>> OLD:
>> III.A.1. ICANN to continue as the IANA functions operator on number 
>> resources
>> III.A.2. IPR related to the provision of the IANA services stay with 
>> the community
>> III.A.3. Contract and Service level agreement with the IANA functions 
>> operator on number resources
>> III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee
>>
>> NEW:
>> III.A (1) ICANN to continue as the IANA functions operator on number 
>> resources
>> III.A (2) IPR related to the provision of the IANA services stay with 
>> the community
>> III.A (3) Contract and Service level agreement with the IANA functions 
>> operator on
>> number resources
>> III.A (4) Establishment of a Review Committee
> 
> I would prefer to keep the existing numbering, in the style III.A.1, for 
> consistency with other partsof the document, where third-level section 
> numbers use arabic numerals without parentheses.
> 
> I'd suggest deferring this isue until a subsequent draft.
> 

That's fine with me.

As I sent in the previous e-mail, I'm good with your suggestion to use
i., ii, iii, iv, as long as it's consistent format as what's listed as
proposed elements.

(i,e, change the numbering in III A instead)


Izumi