[CRISP-TEAM] 2ND CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft - CRISP Review

[Alan Barrett]

On Thu, 08 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
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>(*) Suggested editorial change:
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>OLD:
>III.A.1. ICANN to continue as the IANA functions operator on number 
>resources
>III.A.2. IPR related to the provision of the IANA services stay with 
>the community
>III.A.3. Contract and Service level agreement with the IANA functions 
>operator on number resources
>III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee
>
>NEW:
>III.A (1) ICANN to continue as the IANA functions operator on number 
>resources
>III.A (2) IPR related to the provision of the IANA services stay with 
>the community
>III.A (3) Contract and Service level agreement with the IANA functions 
>operator on
>number resources
>III.A (4) Establishment of a Review Committee

I would prefer to keep the existing numbering, in the style 
III.A.1, for consistency with other partsof the document, 
where third-level section numbers use arabic numerals without 
parentheses.

I'd suggest deferring this isue until a subsequent draft.

--apb (Alan Barrett)