[CRISP-TEAM] 2ND CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft - CRISP Review
apb at cequrux.com
Thu Jan 8 12:07:09 CET 2015
On Thu, 08 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
> "Contract and Service level agreement with the IANA functions
> operator on number resources"
> "Service level agreement with the IANA functions operator on
> number resources"
> (Comment: I don't know how the "Contract and" snuck in here as
> it wasn't in the final text. But I strongly suggest we remove it
> as it might give the impression that we are talking about two
> things, a contract and an SLA agreement".)
I added the word "Contract" in one of my edits. I am happy for it to be
>(Comment: Instead of "following principles", "principles listed below".)
>V.E The proposal must not replace the NTIA role with a government-led
>or an inter-governmental oranization solution
> "This proposal will place the RIRs in the role currently occupied
> by NTIA."
> "This proposal does not replace the NTIA role with a government-led
> or an inter-governmental oranization solution. This proposal will
> place the RIRs in the role currently occupied by NTIA."
>(Comment: Simply to add clarity. But I do not feel strongly about this.)
I strongly support this change.
I also support the other changes Nurani mentioned (but which I did
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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