[CRISP-TEAM] Comment requested : Handling of Editorial changes needed
apb at cequrux.com
Thu Jan 8 11:45:57 CET 2015
On Thu, 08 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
> Michael has reflected all text changes suggested.
> However, from looking at the whole proposal, I got the
> impression that it was difficult to catch the essence of our
> proposal elements in Section III, as we added more details to
> each of the elements.
> I strongly feel it's important we address this before we submit
> to the ICG , as we should be clear and understanable about what
> we are proposing.
> On the other hand, we may be too short of time to do this work
> before our target at UTC13:00 8th Jan.
> My suggestion is, release this draft based on Michael's draft
> and follow up with edited version, as we did for the first
I have three substantive comments, which I will share in separate
email, and which I would like to be addressed before this draft is
I also have many editorial comments, which I think can wait for a
subsequent edited version.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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