[CRISP-TEAM] [NRO secretariat] 2ND CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft - CRISP Review

[German Valdez]

Hi 

We are approaching to the deadline to submit the 2nd draft.

I’d need to upload files and create the urls for the announcement. 

Are we expecting further changes on the pdf files sent by Michael ? 

Please may I have a clear go on what document should be finally posted as 2nd draft.

Cheers

German

> On 8 Jan 2015, at 7:48 pm, Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:
> 
> On Thu, 08 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>> 2. URL references
>> We have used a variety of different methods to include URL pointers throughout the document. It might be a little late to try to tidy that up at this stage (and it's not paramount), but would we want to include footnotes in the text for parts that refer to the URLs we list under "Relevant links"? (To make the document clearer and easier to read.)
>> 
>> This is partly a question for the group, but also really a question for Michael as it entails a bit of work to insert relevant footnote numbers in the text.
>> 
>> Perhaps, the most reasonable approach if we decide to do this, is to do it in the tidying-up phase, after the publication of the second draft (8-12 Jan).
> 
> I like consistency.  I notice things like a sentence with only one space
> after the full stop while other sentences have two spaces, or vice
> versa.
> 
> There's probably not time, in the next few hours, to make all the URL
> references use consistent styles, or to convert them to footnotes, but
> I think we can address that in between the second draft and the final
> version.
> 
> However, if we are planning to move things to footnotes later, then we
> should probably say so in today's announcement.
> 
> --apb (Alan Barrett)
> 
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