[CRISP-TEAM] 2ND CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft - CRISP Review

[Craig Ng]

Thanks Michael.

I have read the final document. Looks good to me.

Thanks for all your hard work on this.

Craig


On 8/01/2015 7:07 pm, "Michael Abejuela" <mabejuela at arin.net> wrote:

> Hello CRISP Team,
> 
> Thank you all for your comments and redlined text, it definitely helped with
> incorporating the edits into this 2nd draft of the proposal.  Thank you also
> to Izumi and Alan for compiling a lot of the necessary changes into a
> consolidated form.  I attempted to incorporate all of the revised text, but
> please review for any that I may have missed and need to edit.  I also
> proposed a numbering scheme that may or may not seem awkward to some but
> appreciate any feedback on this item as well.  I am attaching both a clean and
> redline version for your review.  I will also make final formatting updates on
> the final draft for release as a last cleanup.
> 
> One editorial item I did incorporate but ask for your comment or approval is
> in the section now labeled II.B.3.ii Regional Internet Registries ­ second
> paragraph, last sentence where I have removed ³specific funding or operational
> resolutions² and in its place put ³matters related to the respective RIR.²  I
> made this language more general to be in line with my understanding of all the
> RIRs and to avoid any confusion that there are specific funding or operational
> resolutions for which members cast votes on a regular basis.
> 
> After reviewing this draft, please let me know if there are any additional
> changes to be made.  I recall that we have a deadline for comments at 11:00
> UTC so that I can incorporate any final edits by 12:00 UTC and ultimate
> release of the proposal to the community at 13:00 UTC.
> 
> Thanks,
> -Michael
> 
> p.s.  One item I recall there being a removal of text had to do with the
> discussion of the issue of how detailed provisions about the contract would be
> included but I did not remove any such text.  It may have already been
> addressed in the edits but I wanted to confirm with the team just in case.
> Thanks.
> 
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