[CRISP-TEAM] CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process

Izumi Okutani izumi at nic.ad.jp
Thu Jan 8 08:48:57 CET 2015


>> Assuming Izumi is okay with the language, I have incorporated into
the 2nd
>> draft.  We can amend if needed at the last call edit before the
>> finalization of the draft for release.
>
> Agreed.

+1, an I confirm I'm happy with Nurani's text.


Izumi

On 2015/01/08 16:47, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
> 
> On 8 jan 2015, at 08:46, Michael Abejuela <mabejuela at arin.net> wrote:
> 
>> Assuming Izumi is okay with the language, I have incorporated into the 2nd
>> draft.  We can amend if needed at the last call edit before the
>> finalization of the draft for release.
> 
> Agreed.
> 
>> Thanks,
>> -Michael
>>
>> Team, I am just doing one last pass on this and will send out shortly,
>> probably within the next 15 minutes.  Thank you for your patience.
>>
>> p.s.  Just saw the last e-mail and no worries Nurani, I noticed that but
>> was able to ascertain the appropriate text from the e-mail chain
>> (hopefully) :)
> 
> Phew. Thanks.
> 
> I still think I owe you a beer though.
> :)
> 
> Nurani
> 
> 
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>> On 1/8/15, 2:36 AM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
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>>> Michael, all,
>>>
>>> Thanks for this.
>>>
>>> How about:
>>> "Comments mainly focused on clarification of details of these issues.
>>> Support was expressed by several people on the <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing
>>> list on the final, agreed elements of the proposal, listed in Section
>>> III."
>>>
>>> To be inserted in Section VI as the second last paragraph.
>>>
>>> The means the last section reads:
>>> *************
>>> In the global discussions at <ianaxfer at nro.net>, several issues received
>>> close attention and provoked significant discussion. These issues
>>> included:
>>>
>>> ��       Composition of Review Committee
>>> ��       Details of the agreement, including its term and termination
>>> conditions
>>> ��       Intellectual property rights of the data and trademarks
>>> associated with the IANA function
>>>
>>> Comments mainly focused on clarification of details of these issues.
>>> Support was expressed by several people on the <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing
>>> list on the final, agreed elements of the proposal, listed in Section III.
>>>
>>> There was clear agreement from the global community on positions
>>> regarding each of these issues, as reflected in the content of the
>>> current proposal. The CRISP Team believes therefore that the current
>>> proposal fully reflects the consensus of the global numbering community.
>>> *************
>>>
>>> Izumi, does that work for you?
>>>
>>> Nurani
>>>
>>>
>>> On 8 jan 2015, at 08:13, Michael Abejuela <mabejuela at arin.net> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Nurani,
>>>>
>>>> If you would like this added, I can do so.  I��m putting the final
>>>> touches
>>>> on the second draft for the CRISP team��s review now - one or two final
>>>> changes and firming up the numbering scheme.  Please let me know the
>>>> specific text and location and I am happy to incorporate.  I agree it
>>>> may
>>>> be better to incorporate text into the second draft for community
>>>> review.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> -Michael
>>>>
>>>>
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>>>> Michael R. Abejuela
>>>>
>>>> Associate General Counsel
>>>>
>>>> ARIN
>>>>
>>>> 3635 Concorde Parkway
>>>>
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>>>>
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>>>>
>>>> On 1/8/15, 2:10 AM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Izumi,
>>>>>
>>>>> On 8 jan 2015, at 03:58, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Nurani and Colleagues,
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I would like to suggest to add one sentence in the last paragraph on
>>>>>> this section.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> "Comments focused on on clarifications of details of each proposed
>>>>>> elements. Support was expressed by several people on
>>>>>> <ianaxfer at nro.net>
>>>>>> mailing list on what are proposed are elements of the proposal, listed
>>>>>> in Section III".
>>>>>
>>>>> Did you want this added just before the last sentence in this section?
>>>>>
>>>>> With some editorial changes, I think it's fine.
>>>>>
>>>>> And since there's nothing new or controversial in there, maybe we can
>>>>> even get it into the second draft. I think it might be harder to add
>>>>> text
>>>>> after the publication of the second draft.
>>>>>
>>>>> I think we need to end with the sentence about that we believe we have
>>>>> consensus on this proposal.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> Nurani
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Since this is just before the comments deadline of UTC13:00 and others
>>>>>> haven't had time to take a look, I suggest this to be reflected in the
>>>>>> final draft submitting to ICG.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Regards,
>>>>>> Izumi
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 2015/01/07 22:49, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>>>>>>> Dear colleagues,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Please find enclosed a new version (v 1.3) incorporating the LACNIC
>>>>>>> process text (and the additional.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> LACNIC CRISP Team members, could I ask you to please take an extra
>>>>>>> look at this text to see if it correctly reflects the LACNIC process?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> ARIN CRISP Team members, please feel free to add your ARIN processes
>>>>>>> directly in the document, keeping "track changes" in. It might be an
>>>>>>> easier way of moving forward as I don't think the whole CRISP team
>>>>>>> needs to review your part as you know it best. Also, we will soon
>>>>>>> reach
>>>>>>> the end of our day here in Europe, so I'm happy for you to take over
>>>>>>> the pen. Hope you are happy with this approach!
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Nurani
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 7 jan 2015, at 12:04, Ernest Byaruhanga <ernest at afrinic.net>
>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On 7 January 2015 12:18:58 Ernest Byaruhanga <ernest at afrinic.net>
>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> |
>>>>>>>> | On 7 January 2015 12:14:25 Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>> |
>>>>>>>> | | On Tue, 06 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>>>>>>>> | | >Please find attached an updated text for Section VI. Community
>>>>>>>> Process.
>>>>>>>> | |
>>>>>>>> | | Thank you, Nurani.  That is an improvement on the previous text.
>>>>>>>> | |
>>>>>>>> | | I can't fill in the placeholder <INCLUDE CRISP TEAM SELECTION
>>>>>>>> | | PROCESS FOR AFRINIC>, because the Afrinic web site is not
>>>>>>>> working
>>>>>>>> | | for me (I keep on getting "the connection was reset").
>>>>>>>> |
>>>>>>>> | Sorry Alan, let me get our folks to fix that.
>>>>>>>> |
>>>>>>>> | | Ernest, please could you provide some text for this?  I think we
>>>>>>>> | | should include the data of the call for nominations, a link to
>>>>>>>> an
>>>>>>>> | | archived email message for the call, the closing date of the
>>>>>>>> call
>>>>>>>> | | for nominations, the number of nominations received, the date of
>>>>>>>> | | the announcement, a link to an archived email message for the
>>>>>>>> | | announcement, and links to relevant web pages.
>>>>>>>> |
>>>>>>>> | OK. Sharing shortly.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Hoping this will do. The board did not publicly share the number of
>>>>>>>> nominations that were received.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> ___________________________________________
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> AFRINIC CRISP Team selection/appointment process
>>>>>>>> ------------------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The AFRINIC region CRISP team was selected/appointed by the AFRINIC
>>>>>>>> Board of Directors. Key highlights/milestones of the
>>>>>>>> selection/appointment process follow below:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 27 Oct 2014: Public Call for nominations - The call was sent by the
>>>>>>>> AFRINIC CEO to major community mailing lists, indicating intent of
>>>>>>>> the
>>>>>>>> Board to make appointments by 12 Nov 2014.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> URL: https://lists.afrinic.net/pipermail/announce/2014/001326.html
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 13 Nov 2014: The AFRINIC Board Chair announced the three CRISP team
>>>>>>>> members selected to the community.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> URL: https://lists.afrinic.net/pipermail/rpd/2014/004381.html
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The AFRINIC IANA oversight transition info page can be found at:
>>>>>>>> http://www.afrinic.net/en/community/iana-oversight-transition
>>>>>>>> _______________________________________________
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Regards
>>>>>>>> Ernest.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> |
>>>>>>>> | Regards
>>>>>>>> | Ernest.
>>>>>>>> |
>>>>>>>> |
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
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