[CRISP-TEAM] CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process

Thu Jan 8 08:36:38 CET 2015

Michael, all,

Thanks for this.

How about:
"Comments mainly focused on clarification of details of these issues. Support was expressed by several people on the <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list on the final, agreed elements of the proposal, listed in Section III."

To be inserted in Section VI as the second last paragraph. 

The means the last section reads:
*************
In the global discussions at <ianaxfer at nro.net>, several issues received close attention and provoked significant discussion. These issues included:

·       Composition of Review Committee
·       Details of the agreement, including its term and termination conditions
·       Intellectual property rights of the data and trademarks associated with the IANA function

Comments mainly focused on clarification of details of these issues. Support was expressed by several people on the <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list on the final, agreed elements of the proposal, listed in Section III.

There was clear agreement from the global community on positions regarding each of these issues, as reflected in the content of the current proposal. The CRISP Team believes therefore that the current proposal fully reflects the consensus of the global numbering community.
*************

Izumi, does that work for you?

Nurani

On 8 jan 2015, at 08:13, Michael Abejuela <mabejuela at arin.net> wrote:

> Nurani,
> 
> If you would like this added, I can do so.  I¹m putting the final touches
> on the second draft for the CRISP team¹s review now - one or two final
> changes and firming up the numbering scheme.  Please let me know the
> specific text and location and I am happy to incorporate.  I agree it may
> be better to incorporate text into the second draft for community review.
> 
> Thanks,
> -Michael
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> On 1/8/15, 2:10 AM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
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>> Izumi,
>> 
>> On 8 jan 2015, at 03:58, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>> 
>>> Nurani and Colleagues,
>>> 
>>> 
>>> I would like to suggest to add one sentence in the last paragraph on
>>> this section.
>>> 
>>> "Comments focused on on clarifications of details of each proposed
>>> elements. Support was expressed by several people on <ianaxfer at nro.net>
>>> mailing list on what are proposed are elements of the proposal, listed
>>> in Section III".
>> 
>> Did you want this added just before the last sentence in this section?
>> 
>> With some editorial changes, I think it's fine.
>> 
>> And since there's nothing new or controversial in there, maybe we can
>> even get it into the second draft. I think it might be harder to add text
>> after the publication of the second draft.
>> 
>> I think we need to end with the sentence about that we believe we have
>> consensus on this proposal.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Nurani
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> Since this is just before the comments deadline of UTC13:00 and others
>>> haven't had time to take a look, I suggest this to be reflected in the
>>> final draft submitting to ICG.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Regards,
>>> Izumi
>>> 
>>> 
>>> On 2015/01/07 22:49, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>>>> Dear colleagues,
>>>> 
>>>> Please find enclosed a new version (v 1.3) incorporating the LACNIC
>>>> process text (and the additional.
>>>> 
>>>> LACNIC CRISP Team members, could I ask you to please take an extra
>>>> look at this text to see if it correctly reflects the LACNIC process?
>>>> 
>>>> ARIN CRISP Team members, please feel free to add your ARIN processes
>>>> directly in the document, keeping "track changes" in. It might be an
>>>> easier way of moving forward as I don't think the whole CRISP team
>>>> needs to review your part as you know it best. Also, we will soon reach
>>>> the end of our day here in Europe, so I'm happy for you to take over
>>>> the pen. Hope you are happy with this approach!
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you,
>>>> 
>>>> Nurani
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> On 7 jan 2015, at 12:04, Ernest Byaruhanga <ernest at afrinic.net> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> On 7 January 2015 12:18:58 Ernest Byaruhanga <ernest at afrinic.net>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> |
>>>>> | On 7 January 2015 12:14:25 Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:
>>>>> |
>>>>> | | On Tue, 06 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>>>>> | | >Please find attached an updated text for Section VI. Community
>>>>> Process.
>>>>> | |
>>>>> | | Thank you, Nurani.  That is an improvement on the previous text.
>>>>> | |
>>>>> | | I can't fill in the placeholder <INCLUDE CRISP TEAM SELECTION
>>>>> | | PROCESS FOR AFRINIC>, because the Afrinic web site is not working
>>>>> | | for me (I keep on getting "the connection was reset").
>>>>> |
>>>>> | Sorry Alan, let me get our folks to fix that.
>>>>> |
>>>>> | | Ernest, please could you provide some text for this?  I think we
>>>>> | | should include the data of the call for nominations, a link to an
>>>>> | | archived email message for the call, the closing date of the call
>>>>> | | for nominations, the number of nominations received, the date of
>>>>> | | the announcement, a link to an archived email message for the
>>>>> | | announcement, and links to relevant web pages.
>>>>> |
>>>>> | OK. Sharing shortly.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hoping this will do. The board did not publicly share the number of
>>>>> nominations that were received.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> ___________________________________________
>>>>> 
>>>>> AFRINIC CRISP Team selection/appointment process
>>>>> ------------------------------------------------
>>>>> 
>>>>> The AFRINIC region CRISP team was selected/appointed by the AFRINIC
>>>>> Board of Directors. Key highlights/milestones of the
>>>>> selection/appointment process follow below:
>>>>> 
>>>>> 27 Oct 2014: Public Call for nominations - The call was sent by the
>>>>> AFRINIC CEO to major community mailing lists, indicating intent of the
>>>>> Board to make appointments by 12 Nov 2014.
>>>>> 
>>>>> URL: https://lists.afrinic.net/pipermail/announce/2014/001326.html
>>>>> 
>>>>> 13 Nov 2014: The AFRINIC Board Chair announced the three CRISP team
>>>>> members selected to the community.
>>>>> 
>>>>> URL: https://lists.afrinic.net/pipermail/rpd/2014/004381.html
>>>>> 
>>>>> The AFRINIC IANA oversight transition info page can be found at:
>>>>> http://www.afrinic.net/en/community/iana-oversight-transition
>>>>> _______________________________________________
>>>>> 
>>>>> Regards
>>>>> Ernest.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> |
>>>>> | Regards
>>>>> | Ernest.
>>>>> |
>>>>> |
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
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