[CRISP-TEAM] List of texts to be incorporated in 2nd draft

[Nurani Nimpuno]

Izumi,

Yes, thanks. All clear. 
Nurani

On 8 jan 2015, at 03:43, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

> Nurani,
> 
> 
> I suspect you may be off-line now - but responding for clarity.
> 
> 
>> I sent the updated VI (community process) text with all incorporated
> input to the list a during our teleconference.
> 
> Yes, thanks.
> 
> My understanding of the current status is:
> - ver.1.3 needs to incorporate suggestions from Ernest and Mwendwa.
> 
> I think we can leave it to Michael to incorporate texts from Ernest and
> Mwendwa, as it's simply a matter of copying the suggested texts.
> 
>> The final V (NTIA requirements) was sent out on Monday. But I can
> re-send it in an hour when I'm in front of my computer.
> 
> I confirmed your post. "Section V NTIA Requirements - final version".
> Helpful to confirm what the final version is - Thank you.
> 
> 
> 
> Many thanks Nurani for working on these sections and incorporating
> inputs from multiple members.
> 
> I think these sections are really good now.
> 
> 
> Izumi
> 
> 
> On 2015/01/08 4:01, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>> Izumi,
>> 
>>> On 7 jan 2015, at 19:07, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Michael,
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Please find below the list of texts which needs to be incorporated in
>>> the 2nd draft.
>>> 
>>> Alan and Nurani,
>>> It would be helpful, if you are able to send Michael the latest version,
>>> for clarfiy.
>> 
>> I sent the updated VI (community process) text with all incorporated input to the list a during our teleconference.
>> 
>> The final V (NTIA requirements) was sent out on Monday. But I can re-send it in an hour when I'm in front of my computer.
>> 
>> Izumi, please me know if you are referring to another text!
>> 
>> Kind regards,
>> 
>> Nurani
>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> * delegation of IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees
>>>      --> Reflect Alan's text on IANAXFER list "delegation of
>>>          IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees"
>>> 
>>> * V NTIA Requirements
>>>      --> Reflect Nurani's text
>>>     [Nurani: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
>>> 
>>> 
>>> * Editorial suggestions (From Filiz Yilmaz)
>>>      --> Reflect what is described on the IANAXFER list
>>> 
>>> * CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process
>>>  (Section VI)
>>>   -  Comments made by Paul, Andrei, Craig, Esteban, Andres, Ernest,
>>>      Mwendwa, Izumi
>>>   -  ARIN region proposal waiting to be reflected
>>> 
>>> * IPR considerations - Final text
>>>   - Andrei has shared the draft incorporating Alan & Izumi's comments
>>> 
>>> * SLA Principles - FInal text - section III
>>>   - Draft shared by Paul
>>>   - Izumi has made comment
>>> 
>>> * Review Committee changes
>>>   - Draft shared by Alan
>>>   - Alan has made text suggestion to Izumi's comment "Maximum Review
>>>     Interval Term to be 3 years"
>>>     [Alan: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> Izumi
>>> 
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