[CRISP-TEAM] List of texts to be incorporated in 2nd draft

[Michael Abejuela]

Thanks Izumi, working on it now so I¹ll definitely let you know if I have
any questions. This is very helpful though!

Thanks,
-Michael

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On 1/7/15, 10:52 PM, "Izumi Okutani" <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

>Michael and CRISP Team,
>
>
>This is the updated version, after we closed the comment period.
>Each item (except comment from Filiz) is consistent with title of e-mail
>thread, so it should be trackable from that.
>
>It's possible I may have missed something, so I would recommend you to
>double check with your list, which I trust you would anyways.
>
>Let me know if you have any questions/clarifications needed!
>Many thanks Michael.
>
>
>
>To CRISP Team,
>If there are any text suggestions you made but not listed here, please
>share on the list so that Michael can reflect in the 2nd draft.
>
>
>-----------------------------------------------------------------------
>* delegation of IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees
>      --> Alan's text on IANAXFER list "delegation of
>          IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees"
>
>* V NTIA Requirements
>      --> Nurani's text "Section V NTIA Requirements - final version"
>
>* Editorial suggestions (From Filiz Yilmaz)
>      --> Reflect what is described on the IANAXFER list
>
>* CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process
>  (Section VI)
>   -  Comments made by Paul, Andrei, Craig, Esteban, Andres, Ernest,
>      Mwendwa, Izumi
>   -  SectionVI-v1.3.docx sent by Nurani needs to incorporate texts
>      from Ernest and Mwenedwa (See "Changes to be incorporated")
>   -  APNIC text, sent by Craig NG needs to be incorporated
>   -  Please double check whether comments from Paul and Andrei are
>      incorporated.
>   -  ARIN region proposal waiting to be reflected
>
>* IPR considerations - Final text
>   - Andrei has shared the draft incorporating Alan & Izumi's comments
>     (CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft 24122014-IPR-issues-final.docx)
>
>* SLA Principles - FInal text - section III
>   - Draft shared by Paul after the 9th call
>     (CRISP-IANA-SLA-Section III final text - Nurani Paul.docx)
>   - Izumi has made comment
>     (Not to be reflected until confirmation from Paul or Nurani)
>
>* Review Committee changes
>   - Draft shared by Alan: two versions sent, check the latest one
>     (CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft with Review Committee issues
>20150107-redline.docx)
>   - Alan has made text suggestion to Izumi's comment "Maximum Review
>     Interval Term to be 3 years"
>     (Not reflected in the latest word file, and needs to be
>      incorporated in the 2nd draft)
>-----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>Regards,
>Izumi
>
>
>On 2015/01/08 3:07, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>> Michael,
>> 
>> 
>> Please find below the list of texts which needs to be incorporated in
>> the 2nd draft.
>> 
>> Alan and Nurani,
>> It would be helpful, if you are able to send Michael the latest version,
>> for clarfiy.
>> 
>> 
>> * delegation of IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees
>>        --> Reflect Alan's text on IANAXFER list "delegation of
>>            IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees"
>> 
>> * V NTIA Requirements
>>        --> Reflect Nurani's text
>>       [Nurani: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
>> 
>> 
>> * Editorial suggestions (From Filiz Yilmaz)
>>        --> Reflect what is described on the IANAXFER list
>> 
>> * CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process
>>    (Section VI)
>>     -  Comments made by Paul, Andrei, Craig, Esteban, Andres, Ernest,
>>        Mwendwa, Izumi
>>     -  ARIN region proposal waiting to be reflected
>> 
>> * IPR considerations - Final text
>>     - Andrei has shared the draft incorporating Alan & Izumi's comments
>> 
>> * SLA Principles - FInal text - section III
>>     - Draft shared by Paul
>>     - Izumi has made comment
>> 
>> * Review Committee changes
>>     - Draft shared by Alan
>>     - Alan has made text suggestion to Izumi's comment "Maximum Review
>>       Interval Term to be 3 years"
>>       [Alan: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
>> 
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Izumi
>> 
>
>
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