[CRISP-TEAM] List of texts to be incorporated in 2nd draft

[Izumi Okutani]

Nurani,


I suspect you may be off-line now - but responding for clarity.


> I sent the updated VI (community process) text with all incorporated
input to the list a during our teleconference.

Yes, thanks.

My understanding of the current status is:
 - ver.1.3 needs to incorporate suggestions from Ernest and Mwendwa.

I think we can leave it to Michael to incorporate texts from Ernest and
Mwendwa, as it's simply a matter of copying the suggested texts.

> The final V (NTIA requirements) was sent out on Monday. But I can
re-send it in an hour when I'm in front of my computer.

I confirmed your post. "Section V NTIA Requirements - final version".
Helpful to confirm what the final version is - Thank you.



Many thanks Nurani for working on these sections and incorporating
inputs from multiple members.

I think these sections are really good now.


Izumi


On 2015/01/08 4:01, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
> Izumi,
> 
>> On 7 jan 2015, at 19:07, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>
>> Michael,
>>
>>
>> Please find below the list of texts which needs to be incorporated in
>> the 2nd draft.
>>
>> Alan and Nurani,
>> It would be helpful, if you are able to send Michael the latest version,
>> for clarfiy.
> 
> I sent the updated VI (community process) text with all incorporated input to the list a during our teleconference.
> 
> The final V (NTIA requirements) was sent out on Monday. But I can re-send it in an hour when I'm in front of my computer.
> 
> Izumi, please me know if you are referring to another text!
> 
> Kind regards,
> 
> Nurani
> 
>>
>>
>> * delegation of IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees
>>       --> Reflect Alan's text on IANAXFER list "delegation of
>>           IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees"
>>
>> * V NTIA Requirements
>>       --> Reflect Nurani's text
>>      [Nurani: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
>>
>>
>> * Editorial suggestions (From Filiz Yilmaz)
>>       --> Reflect what is described on the IANAXFER list
>>
>> * CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process
>>   (Section VI)
>>    -  Comments made by Paul, Andrei, Craig, Esteban, Andres, Ernest,
>>       Mwendwa, Izumi
>>    -  ARIN region proposal waiting to be reflected
>>
>> * IPR considerations - Final text
>>    - Andrei has shared the draft incorporating Alan & Izumi's comments
>>
>> * SLA Principles - FInal text - section III
>>    - Draft shared by Paul
>>    - Izumi has made comment
>>
>> * Review Committee changes
>>    - Draft shared by Alan
>>    - Alan has made text suggestion to Izumi's comment "Maximum Review
>>      Interval Term to be 3 years"
>>      [Alan: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
>>
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Izumi
>>
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