[CRISP-TEAM] List of texts to be incorporated in 2nd draft
izumi at nic.ad.jp
Thu Jan 8 03:43:45 CET 2015
I suspect you may be off-line now - but responding for clarity.
> I sent the updated VI (community process) text with all incorporated
input to the list a during our teleconference.
My understanding of the current status is:
- ver.1.3 needs to incorporate suggestions from Ernest and Mwendwa.
I think we can leave it to Michael to incorporate texts from Ernest and
Mwendwa, as it's simply a matter of copying the suggested texts.
> The final V (NTIA requirements) was sent out on Monday. But I can
re-send it in an hour when I'm in front of my computer.
I confirmed your post. "Section V NTIA Requirements - final version".
Helpful to confirm what the final version is - Thank you.
Many thanks Nurani for working on these sections and incorporating
inputs from multiple members.
I think these sections are really good now.
On 2015/01/08 4:01, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>> On 7 jan 2015, at 19:07, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>> Please find below the list of texts which needs to be incorporated in
>> the 2nd draft.
>> Alan and Nurani,
>> It would be helpful, if you are able to send Michael the latest version,
>> for clarfiy.
> I sent the updated VI (community process) text with all incorporated input to the list a during our teleconference.
> The final V (NTIA requirements) was sent out on Monday. But I can re-send it in an hour when I'm in front of my computer.
> Izumi, please me know if you are referring to another text!
> Kind regards,
>> * delegation of IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees
>> --> Reflect Alan's text on IANAXFER list "delegation of
>> IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees"
>> * V NTIA Requirements
>> --> Reflect Nurani's text
>> [Nurani: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
>> * Editorial suggestions (From Filiz Yilmaz)
>> --> Reflect what is described on the IANAXFER list
>> * CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process
>> (Section VI)
>> - Comments made by Paul, Andrei, Craig, Esteban, Andres, Ernest,
>> Mwendwa, Izumi
>> - ARIN region proposal waiting to be reflected
>> * IPR considerations - Final text
>> - Andrei has shared the draft incorporating Alan & Izumi's comments
>> * SLA Principles - FInal text - section III
>> - Draft shared by Paul
>> - Izumi has made comment
>> * Review Committee changes
>> - Draft shared by Alan
>> - Alan has made text suggestion to Izumi's comment "Maximum Review
>> Interval Term to be 3 years"
>> [Alan: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
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