[CRISP-TEAM] Reminder Re: All comments/text suggestions be sent before UTC3:00 8th Jan

[Izumi Okutani]

CRISP Team,


This is a reminder that we are closing commments for text suggestions in
roughtly 30 minutes from now, UTC03:00 8th Jan.

To those who made text suggestions,
Please check if the status below accurately reflects the status.


Latest texts suggested are as below:


* delegation of IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees
      --> Alan's text on IANAXFER list "delegation of
          IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees"

* V NTIA Requirements
      --> Nurani's text "Section V NTIA Requirements - final version"

* Editorial suggestions (From Filiz Yilmaz)
      --> Reflect what is described on the IANAXFER list

* CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process
  (Section VI)
   -  Comments made by Paul, Andrei, Craig, Esteban, Andres, Ernest,
      Mwendwa, Izumi
   -  SectionVI-v1.3.docx sent by Nurani needs to incorporate texts
      from Ernest and Mwenedwa (See "Changes to be incorporated")
   -  ARIN region proposal waiting to be reflected

* IPR considerations - Final text
   - Andrei has shared the draft incorporating Alan & Izumi's comments
     (CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft 24122014-IPR-issues-final.docx)

* SLA Principles - FInal text - section III
   - Draft shared by Paul after the 9th call
     (CRISP-IANA-SLA-Section III final text - Nurani Paul.docx)
   - Izumi has made comment
     (Not to be reflected until confirmation from Paul or Nurani)

* Review Committee changes
   - Draft shared by Alan: two versions sent, check the latest one
     (CRISP IANA PROPOSAL Draft with Review Committee issues
20150107-redline.docx)
   - Alan has made text suggestion to Izumi's comment "Maximum Review
     Interval Term to be 3 years"
     (Not reflected in the latest word file, and needs to be
      incorporated in the 2nd draft)

     [Alan: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]


Thanks,
Izumi

On 2015/01/08 0:18, Izumi Okutani wrote:
> CRISP Team,
> 
> 
> This is the last call for text suggestions to be sent to CRISP Team
> mailing list, for Michael to incorporate it in the 2nd draft.
> 
> Please make sure to send your comments before this time.
> 
> 
> To Paul and Nurani,
> I'd appreciate it if you could share the suggested text for contract,
> base on the 9th call in a few hours (around UTC 19:00), so people have
> time to look and make comments.
> 
> 
> Regards,
> Izumi
> 
>