[CRISP-TEAM] ver.4 Draft Announcement for the proposal

[Nurani Nimpuno]

On 7 jan 2015, at 21:22, Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:

> On Wed, 07 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>>> Dear colleagues,
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
>> 
>> Could we say "second, and final draft" here?
>> (And the proposal we send to the ICG is called the "finalised proposal"?)
> 
> I'd prefer not to label anything as a "final draft" until we send it to
> the ICG.  There's the possibility that something unforseen may happen to
> make us produce another draft.

Ok, I take your point. Let's keep the current wording.

>>> CRISP team have considered all comments expresed on <ianaxfer at nro.net>
>> 
>> expressed
> 
> Also "The CRISP Team".
> 
> 
>>> In developing the final draft based on further feedback, CRISP Team
>> 
>> "The CRISP Team"
>> 
>>> will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial issues
>>> raised by the global community, which are compiled on the published
>> 
>> compiled in the published
>> 
>>> issues list. The Team will not incorporate any issues which are
>>> considered to be unresolved by CRISP Team into the proposal.
>> 
>> Could we reword this to something more positive, but still clear?
>> Would the following work:
>> 
>> "The proposal will only incorporate issues that the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the community".
> 
> I like Nurani's suggested text.
> 
>>> * Discussions by CRISP Team
>>>   Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>>>   minutes and agendas of all CRISP teleconferences and a public
>>>   archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are available at:
>>>   https://nro.net/crisp-team
> 
> Last time I checked, the mailing list archives were not easily
> accessible from that page.  We could ask the secretariat to fix that.

I sent a mail about that to the list today. 
Nurani

> 
> --apb (Alan Barrett)
> 
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