[CRISP-TEAM] ver.4 Draft Announcement for the proposal
nurani at netnod.se
Wed Jan 7 21:32:00 CET 2015
On 7 jan 2015, at 21:22, Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:
> On Wed, 07 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>>> Dear colleagues,
>>> Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
>> Could we say "second, and final draft" here?
>> (And the proposal we send to the ICG is called the "finalised proposal"?)
> I'd prefer not to label anything as a "final draft" until we send it to
> the ICG. There's the possibility that something unforseen may happen to
> make us produce another draft.
Ok, I take your point. Let's keep the current wording.
>>> CRISP team have considered all comments expresed on <ianaxfer at nro.net>
> Also "The CRISP Team".
>>> In developing the final draft based on further feedback, CRISP Team
>> "The CRISP Team"
>>> will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial issues
>>> raised by the global community, which are compiled on the published
>> compiled in the published
>>> issues list. The Team will not incorporate any issues which are
>>> considered to be unresolved by CRISP Team into the proposal.
>> Could we reword this to something more positive, but still clear?
>> Would the following work:
>> "The proposal will only incorporate issues that the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the community".
> I like Nurani's suggested text.
>>> * Discussions by CRISP Team
>>> Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>>> minutes and agendas of all CRISP teleconferences and a public
>>> archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are available at:
> Last time I checked, the mailing list archives were not easily
> accessible from that page. We could ask the secretariat to fix that.
I sent a mail about that to the list today.
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