[CRISP-TEAM] ver.4 Draft Announcement for the proposal
apb at cequrux.com
Wed Jan 7 21:22:30 CET 2015
On Wed, 07 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>> Dear colleagues,
>> Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
>Could we say "second, and final draft" here?
>(And the proposal we send to the ICG is called the "finalised proposal"?)
I'd prefer not to label anything as a "final draft" until we send it to
the ICG. There's the possibility that something unforseen may happen to
make us produce another draft.
>> CRISP team have considered all comments expresed on <ianaxfer at nro.net>
Also "The CRISP Team".
>> In developing the final draft based on further feedback, CRISP Team
>"The CRISP Team"
>> will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial issues
>> raised by the global community, which are compiled on the published
>compiled in the published
>> issues list. The Team will not incorporate any issues which are
>> considered to be unresolved by CRISP Team into the proposal.
> Could we reword this to something more positive, but still clear?
> Would the following work:
> "The proposal will only incorporate issues that the CRISP team
> believes have received consensus support from the community".
I like Nurani's suggested text.
>> * Discussions by CRISP Team
>> Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>> minutes and agendas of all CRISP teleconferences and a public
>> archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are available at:
Last time I checked, the mailing list archives were not easily
accessible from that page. We could ask the secretariat to fix that.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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