[CRISP-TEAM] ver.4 Draft Announcement for the proposal

[Alan Barrett]

On Wed, 07 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>> Dear colleagues,
>>
>>
>> Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
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>Could we say "second, and final draft" here?
>(And the proposal we send to the ICG is called the "finalised proposal"?)

I'd prefer not to label anything as a "final draft" until we send it to
the ICG.  There's the possibility that something unforseen may happen to
make us produce another draft.

>> CRISP team have considered all comments expresed on <ianaxfer at nro.net>
>
>expressed

Also "The CRISP Team".


>>  In developing the final draft based on further feedback, CRISP Team
>
>"The CRISP Team"
>
>>  will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial issues
>>  raised by the global community, which are compiled on the published
>
>compiled in the published
>
>>  issues list. The Team will not incorporate any issues which are
>>  considered to be unresolved by CRISP Team into the proposal.
>
> Could we reword this to something more positive, but still clear?
> Would the following work:
>
> "The proposal will only incorporate issues that the CRISP team 
> believes have received consensus support from the community".

I like Nurani's suggested text.

>> * Discussions by CRISP Team
>>    Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>>    minutes and agendas of all CRISP teleconferences and a public
>>    archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are available at:
>>    https://nro.net/crisp-team

Last time I checked, the mailing list archives were not easily
accessible from that page.  We could ask the secretariat to fix that.

--apb (Alan Barrett)