[CRISP-TEAM] List of texts to be incorporated in 2nd draft

[Nurani Nimpuno]

Izumi,

> On 7 jan 2015, at 19:07, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
> 
> Michael,
> 
> 
> Please find below the list of texts which needs to be incorporated in
> the 2nd draft.
> 
> Alan and Nurani,
> It would be helpful, if you are able to send Michael the latest version,
> for clarfiy.

I sent the updated VI (community process) text with all incorporated input to the list a during our teleconference. 

The final V (NTIA requirements) was sent out on Monday. But I can re-send it in an hour when I'm in front of my computer. 

Izumi, please me know if you are referring to another text!

Kind regards,

Nurani

> 
> 
> * delegation of IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees
>      --> Reflect Alan's text on IANAXFER list "delegation of
>          IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees"
> 
> * V NTIA Requirements
>      --> Reflect Nurani's text
>     [Nurani: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
> 
> 
> * Editorial suggestions (From Filiz Yilmaz)
>      --> Reflect what is described on the IANAXFER list
> 
> * CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process
>  (Section VI)
>   -  Comments made by Paul, Andrei, Craig, Esteban, Andres, Ernest,
>      Mwendwa, Izumi
>   -  ARIN region proposal waiting to be reflected
> 
> * IPR considerations - Final text
>   - Andrei has shared the draft incorporating Alan & Izumi's comments
> 
> * SLA Principles - FInal text - section III
>   - Draft shared by Paul
>   - Izumi has made comment
> 
> * Review Committee changes
>   - Draft shared by Alan
>   - Alan has made text suggestion to Izumi's comment "Maximum Review
>     Interval Term to be 3 years"
>     [Alan: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> Izumi
> 
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