[CRISP-TEAM] List of texts to be incorporated in 2nd draft

[Michael Abejuela]

Thank you Izumi, this is very helpful!  I will be working on the 2nd draft
and will let you know if I have any questions.  Otherwise, I will be
incorporating into the next draft and will circulate to the CRISP team by
the deadline (hopefully before then).

Thanks!
-Michael

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On 1/7/15, 1:07 PM, "Izumi Okutani" <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

>Michael,
>
>
>Please find below the list of texts which needs to be incorporated in
>the 2nd draft.
>
>Alan and Nurani,
>It would be helpful, if you are able to send Michael the latest version,
>for clarfiy.
>
>
>* delegation of IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees
>      --> Reflect Alan's text on IANAXFER list "delegation of
>          IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees"
>
>* V NTIA Requirements
>      --> Reflect Nurani's text
>     [Nurani: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
>
>
>* Editorial suggestions (From Filiz Yilmaz)
>      --> Reflect what is described on the IANAXFER list
>
>* CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process
>  (Section VI)
>   -  Comments made by Paul, Andrei, Craig, Esteban, Andres, Ernest,
>      Mwendwa, Izumi
>   -  ARIN region proposal waiting to be reflected
>
>* IPR considerations - Final text
>   - Andrei has shared the draft incorporating Alan & Izumi's comments
>
>* SLA Principles - FInal text - section III
>   - Draft shared by Paul
>   - Izumi has made comment
>
>* Review Committee changes
>   - Draft shared by Alan
>   - Alan has made text suggestion to Izumi's comment "Maximum Review
>     Interval Term to be 3 years"
>     [Alan: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]
>
>
>Thanks,
>Izumi
>
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