[CRISP-TEAM] List of texts to be incorporated in 2nd draft

[Izumi Okutani]

Michael,


Please find below the list of texts which needs to be incorporated in
the 2nd draft.

Alan and Nurani,
It would be helpful, if you are able to send Michael the latest version,
for clarfiy.


* delegation of IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees
      --> Reflect Alan's text on IANAXFER list "delegation of
          IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA DNS trees"

* V NTIA Requirements
      --> Reflect Nurani's text
     [Nurani: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]


* Editorial suggestions (From Filiz Yilmaz)
      --> Reflect what is described on the IANAXFER list

* CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process
  (Section VI)
   -  Comments made by Paul, Andrei, Craig, Esteban, Andres, Ernest,
      Mwendwa, Izumi
   -  ARIN region proposal waiting to be reflected

* IPR considerations - Final text
   - Andrei has shared the draft incorporating Alan & Izumi's comments

* SLA Principles - FInal text - section III
   - Draft shared by Paul
   - Izumi has made comment

* Review Committee changes
   - Draft shared by Alan
   - Alan has made text suggestion to Izumi's comment "Maximum Review
     Interval Term to be 3 years"
     [Alan: Please send the latest version to Michael for clarity]


Thanks,
Izumi