[CRISP-TEAM] CRISP proposal Section VI. Community Process

[Izumi Okutani]

I strongly agree with Andrei's last point and support his text.
I'm also good on the other two points raised.


Izumi


On 2015/01/07 18:50, Andrei Robachevsky wrote:
> Nurani, thank you for putting this together. Looks really good.
> 
> I have a couple of points, the first is editorial and other two are more
> substantive.
> 
>> The Internet numbers community process can be characterized as "bottom-up", transparent and inclusive
> 
> Perhaps simply "The Internet numbers community process is "bottom-up",
> transparent and inclusive"
> 
>> Existing processes and communication channels could therefore be used for the IANA stewardship transition discussions
> 
> I am not sure other community used their formal PDPs, we certainly
> didn't use it in RIPE. The sentence may imply that we did. Perhaps:
> 
> Existing mechanisms and communication channels could therefore be used
> for the IANA stewardship transition discussions
> 
>> The CRISP team believes that the global community has reached a consensus position on each of these issues, as reflected in the content of the current proposal and is well supported by the global numbering community
> 
> This is the key sentence for the whole section, IMO and we need to make
> it as strong as possible. Maybe something along the lines:
> 
> There was clear agreement from the global community on positions
> regarding each of these issues, as reflected in the content of the
> current proposal. The CRISP Team believes therefore that the current
> proposal fully reflects the consensus of the global numbering community.
> 
> Andrei
> 
> 
> Nurani Nimpuno wrote on 07/01/15 08:05:
>> Thank you very much for your input Craig and Izumi.
>>
>> Please find attached a new version with your comments included.
>>
>> Kind regards,
>> Nurani
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On 7 jan 2015, at 07:56, Craig Ng <craig at apnic.net> wrote:
>>
>>> Thanks very much Nurani.
>>>
>>> Please use the text below for paragraph 2 of your comments below, for
>>> APNIC's description of the CRISP team selection process.
>>>
>>> Craig
>>>
>>> -----
>>> On 23 October 2014, through a post to the APNIC IANAxfer mailing list,
>>> APNIC sought volunteers from the Asia Pacific community to nominate to
>>> join the CRISP team. The nominees were asked to provide information about
>>> their qualifications and interest to the APNIC Executive Council for its
>>> consideration. The nomination period was open for two weeks. On 12
>>> November 2014, the APNIC Executive Council appointed Izumi Okutani and
>>> Dr Govind as its CRISP community members, and Craig Ng as its non-voting
>>> staff member to the CRISP team.
>>>
>>> The information was also posted on APNIC's IANA oversight transition
>>> website:
>>>
>>> APNIC EC announces CRISP Team appointees
>>> APNIC EC seeks nominations for CRISP Team
>>> http://www.apnic.net/community/iana-transition
>>>
>>> -----
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 7/01/2015 9:16 am, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Dear colleagues,
>>>>
>>>> Please find attached an updated text for Section VI. Community Process.
>>>>
>>>> I have incorporated the points that Izumi sent me, but due to timezone
>>>> differences she hasn't been able to review this draft before circulation.
>>>> We agreed that we should prioritise circulating the draft within the team
>>>> as soon as possible, given the short timeline.
>>>>
>>>> I have enabled track changes so it is easy to review the changes.
>>>>
>>>> Three quick comments:
>>>> 1. I have not touched the sections that describe each RIR's process,
>>>> apart from some very minor tidying.
>>>> 2. Please note that both the AfriNIC and APNIC texts need to include a
>>>> short description of the CRISP team selection process.
>>>> 3. The LACNIC and ARIN processes should be inserted. (Please don't forget
>>>> to include the CRISP team selection process for your region.)
>>>>
>>>> Kind regards,
>>>>
>>>> Nurani
>>
>>
>>
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