[CRISP-TEAM] [Feedback before UTC13:00 7th Jan] Draft Announcement for the proposal

[Izumi Okutani]

CRISP Team,


I welcome your feedback on the draft announcement below.

My suggestion it to send this out to IANAXFER list at UTC13:00 8th Jan.
I'd appreciate your feeback bon this draft announcement:

 Before UTC13:00 7th Jan


Thanks,
Izumi


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Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Second Draft
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Dear colleagues,


Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship
Coordination Group (ICG).

This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship
Proposal (CRISP) team, with considerations of feedback received from the
global community on <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.

We continue to welcome comments from the global community for the second
draft proposal.

 Second Draft proposal:
 Clean Version: ## URL ##
 Redline Version: ## URL ##

 The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015
 Feedback should be sent to         : <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list

 Key points:
  - Additional description on contract details, review committee and
    intellectual property rights
  - Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI.
    Community Process for more clarity
  - No changes are made to key elements of the proposal

 Community Inputs Considered by CRISP Team:
   For the community to confirm CRISP Team's response on each of the
   inputs, issues status list is published at:

   ## URL ##

 Key dates:
   Second draft to be published	    :  8 Jan 2015
   Second draft comments close	    : 12 Jan 2015
   Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015

 How to engage in discussions:
  All global discussions, for CRISP team to consider as community
  feedback, will be conducted at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
  All CRISP team discussions are open to observers.

References:
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* Discussions by CRISP Team
    Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
    minutes and agendas of all CRISP teleconferences and a public
    archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are available at:
    https://nro.net/crisp-team

* Other links:
  - ICG request for proposals:
   <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>

  - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
<https://www.nro.net/nro-and-internet-governance/iana-oversight/timeline-for-rirs-engagement-in-iana-stewardship-transition-process>

  - First Draft proposal (Edited version)

https://www.nro.net/wp-content/uploads/CRISP-IANA-PROPOSAL-Draft-24122014-clean.pdf

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