[CRISP-TEAM] Section V NTIA Requirements Re: Updated proposal draft - reordering answers edit

[Nurani Nimpuno]

> On 5 jan 2015, at 11:59, Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:
> 
> On Sun, 04 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>>> • Maintain the security, stability, and resiliency of the Internet DNS;
>>> 
>>> This proposal is grounded in the RIR communities' strongly expressed desire for stability and operational continuity of this critical element of the Internet infrastructure. The operational and policy-making structures relating to management of the global Internet number resource pools have served the Internet community well over time. No changes are proposed in this document that affect the security, stability, and resiliency of the DNS.
>> 
>> I wonder if this question is strictly on DNS or this is in more broader context of infrastructure related to IANA operations.
>> 
>> If it's the latter (broader than DNS),it may be worth describing that our proposal is based on minimum changes to the existing IANA operation to maintain its security, stabililty and resiliency.
> 
> The question is focused on DNS, but I think that our response should be broader.  I like most of Nurani's text, but I suggest editing to clarify that we are concerned with more than DNS stability.  It's also not clear whether "this critical element" means "the DNS" or "what the RIRs do".  I propose the following wording:
> 
>>>> • Maintain the security, stability, and resiliency of the Internet DNS;
> 
> No changes are proposed in this document that affect the security, stability, and resiliency of the DNS.
> 
> This proposal is chiefly concerned with Internet number resources, which also need security, stability, and resiliency.  The existing operational and policy-making structures relating to management of the global Internet number resource pools have served the Internet community well over time, and the RIR communities have strongly expressed a desire for stability and operational continuity of this critical element of the Internet infrastructure.  Accordingly, this proposal suggests minimal changes to existing processes.

Thanks Alan. This works well. 

Nurani 

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> --apb (Alan Barrett)
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