[CRISP-TEAM] Section V NTIA Requirements Re: Updated proposal draft - reordering answers edit

[Izumi Okutani]

Thanks Alan for the suggested text.

> This proposal is chiefly concerned with Internet number resources, which
> also need security, stability, and resiliency.  The existing operational
> and policy-making structures relating to management of the global
> Internet number resource pools have served the Internet community well
> over time, and the RIR communities have strongly expressed a desire for
> stability and operational continuity of this critical element of the
> Internet infrastructure.  Accordingly, this proposal suggests minimal
> changes to existing processes.

I like it. I does make it clear that we have considered security,
stability, and resiliency from the number resources perspective.


Regards,
Izumi


On 2015/01/05 19:59, Alan Barrett wrote:
> On Sun, 04 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>>> ��� Maintain the security, stability, and resiliency of the Internet 
>>> DNS;
>>>
>>> This proposal is grounded in the RIR communities' strongly expressed 
>>> desire for stability and operational continuity of this critical 
>>> element of the Internet infrastructure. The operational and 
>>> policy-making structures relating to management of the global 
>>> Internet number resource pools have served the Internet community 
>>> well over time. No changes are proposed in this document that affect 
>>> the security, stability, and resiliency of the DNS.
>>
>> I wonder if this question is strictly on DNS or this is in more 
>> broader context of infrastructure related to IANA operations.
>>
>> If it's the latter (broader than DNS),it may be worth describing that 
>> our proposal is based on minimum changes to the existing IANA 
>> operation to maintain its security, stabililty and resiliency.
> 
> The question is focused on DNS, but I think that our response should be 
> broader.  I like most of Nurani's text, but I suggest editing to clarify 
> that we are concerned with more than DNS stability.  It's also not clear 
> whether "this critical element" means "the DNS" or "what the RIRs do".  
> I propose the following wording:
> 
>>>> ��� Maintain the security, stability, and resiliency of the Internet 
>>>> DNS;
> 
> No changes are proposed in this document that affect the security, 
> stability, and resiliency of the DNS.
> 
> This proposal is chiefly concerned with Internet number resources, which 
> also need security, stability, and resiliency.  The existing operational 
> and policy-making structures relating to management of the global 
> Internet number resource pools have served the Internet community well 
> over time, and the RIR communities have strongly expressed a desire for 
> stability and operational continuity of this critical element of the 
> Internet infrastructure.  Accordingly, this proposal suggests minimal 
> changes to existing processes.
> 
> --apb (Alan Barrett)
> 
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