[CRISP-TEAM] Decription about 'in-addr.arpa' and 'ip6.arpa' DNS trees" Fwd: [NRO-IANAXFER] Comments on CRISP proposal

[Izumi Okutani]

Thanks Alan for the suggested draft, and posting the suggestion to the
IANAXFER list.

I see the feedback from Andrew Sullivan that the suggested draft
statisfies his point. I think we can consider that we have a general
agreement on how we address this point.


John,
I realise I hadn't reflected this point on Excel.

I'd appreciate it if you could add this issue on Excel (it's a post from
Andrew Sullivan "Comments on CRISP proposal")

 - CRISP Team Status: Consideration completed. the text from Alan
   Barrett on the IANAXFER list to be incorporated in the second draft
 - Action(s) suggested in CRISP Team discussions: the text from Alan to
   be incorporated in the second draft. "delegation of subdomains below
   the IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA domains"


Michael,
If you need more clarify in reflecting this change in the seocnd draft,
please let us know.


Thanks,
Izumi

On 2014/12/30 14:55, Alan Barrett wrote:
> On Tue, 30 Dec 2014, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>> I would like to ask for volunteer to take a look and addres this comment
>> on 'in-addr.arpa' and 'ip6.arpa' DNS trees" for Section 1 (P.1 & 2).
> 
>> (snip)
>> First, as a nit, on page 1, under "description of the service", it
>> mentions "delegation of the 'in-addr.arpa' and 'ip6.arpa' DNS trees".
>> Perhaps this means "delegation from"?  IANA doesn't delegate those two
>> names to any of the RIRs, but delegates spaces within them.  (I
>> suspect this is just an editorial nit, but it confused me on first
>> reading.)  There's a similar issue under "what registries", on p2, and
>> it's only really made clear in the "overlaps" section (also on p2).  I
>> am prepared to imagine that I'm the only person who was led astray by
>> this, and it's not a real big deal, but it might be nice to clarify.
>> (snip)
> 
> I think we specifically said "delegation of the 'in-addr.arpa' and
> 'ip6.arpa' DNS trees" rather than "delegation of the ... domains"
> or "delegation of the ... zones", because we wanted to refer to the
> delegation of multiple subdomains within ip-addr.arpa and ip6.arpa, and
> the term "tree" encompasses all the subdomains, no matter how many zones
> are involved.  Perhaps it would be more clear to say "delegation of
> subdomains below the IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA domains".
> 
> --apb (Alan Barrett)
> 
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