[CRISP-TEAM] Section V NTIA Requirements Re: Updated proposal draft - reordering answers edit

[Nurani Nimpuno]

Dear colleagues,

Please find attached a new, strengthened text on Section V NTIA Requirements. 

It is quite a lot longer than the initial text, but I agree with Izumi that it is vital that we address the requirements set out thoroughly. I would appreciate any feedback you may have.

Kind regards,

Nurani

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Nurani Nimpuno
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On 2 jan 2015, at 13:02, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

> Great Nurani. Thank you for volunteering to work on improving Section V.
> 
> This is an important section to demontrate that our proposal meets NTIA
> requirements.
> 
> 
> Regards,
> Izumi
> 
> On 2015/01/02 19:05, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>> Hi,
>> I can try to work on a new improved text for this section.
>> kind regards,
>> Nurani
>> On 24 dec 2014, at 11:18, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>> Thanks Nurani, John for your feedback.
>>> 
>>> I'd like to ask for volunteer to lead about this issue.
>>> Anyone willing to work on this?
>>> 
>>> I'm willing to follow up as well but I won't be able give enough time to
>>> focus only on this topic, given there are other feedbacks received/to be
>>> received for the proposal.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Izumi
>>> 
>>> (2014/12/23 23:15), Sweeting, John wrote:
>>>> I agree as well, work on it for second draft
>>>> On 12/23/14, 7:59 AM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
>>>>> I agree with your comment Izumi. Let's look at how we can strengthen this
>>>>> section for the second draft.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Kind regards,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Nurani
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On 23 dec 2014, at 12:04, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I wonder if we feel we have properly answered Section "V. NTIA
>>>>>> Requirement".
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I feel this section is a little weak, even though it is very important
>>>>>> we explain we meet the criteria set by NTIA.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> This is beyond editorial review, so let's leave it as it is when
>>>>>> publishing edited version, but we should address it for the 2nd draft.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> What do you think, CRISP Team?
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Izumi
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> (2014/12/23 5:13), Michael Abejuela wrote:
>>>>>>> Hello Everyone,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Please find attached the updated proposal draft as discussed during
>>>>>>> the conference call earlier today.  You will observe both a redline
>>>>>>> version highlighting the changes proposed by myself, Izumi and Alan.
>>>>>>> In addition, a clean version is attached for ease of review that
>>>>>>> includes minor formatting changes.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Please let me know if you have any questions.  Izumi and Alan, I trust
>>>>>>> I was able to capture all of your edits but please review and let me
>>>>>>> know if I have missed any.  I look forward to the team?????????s comments.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>> -Michael
>>>>>>> 
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