[CRISP-TEAM] Section V NTIA Requirements Re: Updated proposal draft - reordering answers edit

Izumi Okutani izumi at nic.ad.jp
Fri Jan 2 13:02:03 CET 2015

Great Nurani. Thank you for volunteering to work on improving Section V.

This is an important section to demontrate that our proposal meets NTIA


On 2015/01/02 19:05, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
> Hi,
> I can try to work on a new improved text for this section.
> kind regards,
> Nurani
> On 24 dec 2014, at 11:18, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>> Thanks Nurani, John for your feedback.
>> I'd like to ask for volunteer to lead about this issue.
>> Anyone willing to work on this?
>> I'm willing to follow up as well but I won't be able give enough time to
>> focus only on this topic, given there are other feedbacks received/to be
>> received for the proposal.
>> Izumi
>> (2014/12/23 23:15), Sweeting, John wrote:
>>> I agree as well, work on it for second draft
>>> On 12/23/14, 7:59 AM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
>>>> I agree with your comment Izumi. Let's look at how we can strengthen this
>>>> section for the second draft.
>>>> Kind regards,
>>>> Nurani
>>>>> On 23 dec 2014, at 12:04, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>>>> I wonder if we feel we have properly answered Section "V. NTIA
>>>>> Requirement".
>>>>> I feel this section is a little weak, even though it is very important
>>>>> we explain we meet the criteria set by NTIA.
>>>>> This is beyond editorial review, so let's leave it as it is when
>>>>> publishing edited version, but we should address it for the 2nd draft.
>>>>> What do you think, CRISP Team?
>>>>> Izumi
>>>>> (2014/12/23 5:13), Michael Abejuela wrote:
>>>>>> Hello Everyone,
>>>>>> Please find attached the updated proposal draft as discussed during
>>>>>> the conference call earlier today.  You will observe both a redline
>>>>>> version highlighting the changes proposed by myself, Izumi and Alan.
>>>>>> In addition, a clean version is attached for ease of review that
>>>>>> includes minor formatting changes.
>>>>>> Please let me know if you have any questions.  Izumi and Alan, I trust
>>>>>> I was able to capture all of your edits but please review and let me
>>>>>> know if I have missed any.  I look forward to the team���������s comments.
>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>> -Michael
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