[CRISP-TEAM] Section V NTIA Requirements Re: Updated proposal draft - reordering answers edit

[Nurani Nimpuno]

Hi,

I can try to work on a new improved text for this section.

kind regards,

Nurani

On 24 dec 2014, at 11:18, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

> Thanks Nurani, John for your feedback.
> 
> I'd like to ask for volunteer to lead about this issue.
> Anyone willing to work on this?
> 
> I'm willing to follow up as well but I won't be able give enough time to
> focus only on this topic, given there are other feedbacks received/to be
> received for the proposal.
> 
> 
> Izumi
> 
> (2014/12/23 23:15), Sweeting, John wrote:
>> I agree as well, work on it for second draft
>> On 12/23/14, 7:59 AM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
>>> I agree with your comment Izumi. Let's look at how we can strengthen this
>>> section for the second draft.
>>> 
>>> Kind regards,
>>> 
>>> Nurani
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> On 23 dec 2014, at 12:04, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> I wonder if we feel we have properly answered Section "V. NTIA
>>>> Requirement".
>>>> 
>>>> I feel this section is a little weak, even though it is very important
>>>> we explain we meet the criteria set by NTIA.
>>>> 
>>>> This is beyond editorial review, so let's leave it as it is when
>>>> publishing edited version, but we should address it for the 2nd draft.
>>>> 
>>>> What do you think, CRISP Team?
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Izumi
>>>> 
>>>> (2014/12/23 5:13), Michael Abejuela wrote:
>>>>> Hello Everyone,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Please find attached the updated proposal draft as discussed during
>>>>> the conference call earlier today.  You will observe both a redline
>>>>> version highlighting the changes proposed by myself, Izumi and Alan.
>>>>> In addition, a clean version is attached for ease of review that
>>>>> includes minor formatting changes.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Please let me know if you have any questions.  Izumi and Alan, I trust
>>>>> I was able to capture all of your edits but please review and let me
>>>>> know if I have missed any.  I look forward to the team���s comments.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> -Michael
>>>>> 
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