[CRISP-TEAM] Response to the ICG Re: Actions

[Nurani Nimpuno]

Looks good to me! Just a couple of minor edits below. I’ve also pasted the modified text below.

Thanks,
Nurani

> On 26 aug 2015, at 19:06, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
> 
> Thanks Andrei, both points really helpful and reflected.
> 
> 
> Izumi
> 
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> Subject: Call for submission of comment to the combined ICG proposal and the CRISP Team draft response
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> Dear Colleagues,
> 
> 
> 
> We would like to share the attached CRISP Team response to the draft IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal for public comment.
> 
> IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal: Call for Public Comment 
> https://www.ianacg.org/calls-for-input/combined-proposal-public-comment-period/
> 
> As described in the call for Public Comment by the ICG:
> 
> "It is critical that the ICG build a public record that reflects broad community support for the proposal and justifies the proposal’s conformance with the NTIA criteria before the proposal can be submitted to NTIA. Thus, commenters are encouraged to file comments in support of the proposal even if they have no concerns to express about the proposal."
> 
> You can contribute to the process in three ways as described below.
> 
> 1. Submit your own comment to the ICG
>   We strongly encourage you to submit your comment to the ICG.
>   This helps the ICG to build public record that the combined proposal has support of the broad community.
> 
>   - It is not a requirement to respond to all questions from the ICG. 
>     Submission of comments expressing a general support for the proposal itself would be helpful enough, without responding to specific aspects of the proposal.
>   - Please feel free to use the CRISP Team response as a reference, in considering contents for your own submission.
>     Words in bold letters cover a general observation which could be applicable to anyone in the number resources community.
>     Details specific to the CRISP Team are in italics.
> 
>     Deadline of the submission: 8 September 2015 at 23:59 UTC
>      - You can submit your comment using the online form or by e-mail 

by e-mail to <public-comments at ianacg.org>.

>        For details see: https://www.ianacg.org/calls-for-input/combined-proposal-public-comment-period/#instructionssubmitcomment
> 
> 2. Help spread the words

word

>   Encourage others to submit comments to the ICG.
> 
> 3. Express support to the CRISP Team response to the ICG
>   Support expressed by e-mail to <ianaxfer at nro.net> before 7 September 2015 23:59 UTC will be recorded as the level of support from the number resources community to the CRISP

Number Community

>  Team response.
>   We will share this in our response to the ICG, but will not share the names of individuals who expressed support. We therefore encourage you to submit your own comment to the ICG in addition, as described in 1.
> 
> 
> We are looking forward to your contributions in this important phase of the process, as an opportunity to express support towards the transition which will be lead to bottom-up, community based oversight mechanism for the IANA functions.
> 
> 
> Best Regards,
> 
> Izumi Okutani and Nurani Nimpuno
> on behalf of the CRISP Team
> 
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Subject: Call for submission of comment to the combined ICG proposal and the CRISP Team draft response
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Dear Colleagues,



We would like to share the attached CRISP Team response to the draft IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal for public comment.

IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal: Call for Public Comment 
https://www.ianacg.org/calls-for-input/combined-proposal-public-comment-period/

As described in the call for Public Comment by the ICG:

"It is critical that the ICG build a public record that reflects broad community support for the proposal and justifies the proposal’s conformance with the NTIA criteria before the proposal can be submitted to NTIA. Thus, commenters are encouraged to file comments in support of the proposal even if they have no concerns to express about the proposal."

You can contribute to the process in three ways as described below.

1. Submit your own comment to the ICG
  We strongly encourage you to submit your comment to the ICG.
  This helps the ICG to build public record that the combined proposal has support of the broad community.

  - It is not a requirement to respond to all questions from the ICG. 
    Submission of comments expressing a general support for the proposal itself would be helpful enough, without responding to specific aspects of the proposal.
  - Please feel free to use the CRISP Team response as a reference, in considering contents for your own submission.
    Words in bold letters cover a general observation which could be applicable to anyone in the Number Community.
    Details specific to the CRISP Team are in italics.

    Deadline of the submission: 8 September 2015 at 23:59 UTC
     - You can submit your comment using the online form or by e-mail to <public-comments at ianacg.org>. 
       For details see: https://www.ianacg.org/calls-for-input/combined-proposal-public-comment-period/#instructionssubmitcomment

2. Help spread the word
  Encourage others to submit comments to the ICG.

3. Express support to the CRISP Team response to the ICG
  Support expressed by e-mail to <ianaxfer at nro.net> before 7 September 2015 23:59 UTC will be recorded as the level of support from the Number Community to the CRISP Team response.
  We will share this in our response to the ICG, but will not share the names of individuals who expressed support. We therefore encourage you to submit your own comment to the ICG in addition, as described in 1.


We are looking forward to your contributions in this important phase of the process, as an opportunity to express support towards the transition which will be lead to bottom-up, community based oversight mechanism for the IANA functions.


Best Regards,

Izumi Okutani and Nurani Nimpuno
on behalf of the CRISP Team

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