[CRISP-TEAM] Draft response Q1-4

[Mwendwa Kivuva]

I corrected one or two typos.

On the IPR part, I added the concurrence from the ICANN board "During the
transition, ICANN is prepared to transfer full ownership of the
IANA-related trademarks to a neutral third party mutually agreed among the
operational communities with the understanding that ICANN, as the current
IANA Functions Operator, will be granted license to those trademarks and
ICANN will maintain operational control of the IANA.ORG domain for as long
as ICANN remains the IANA Functions Operator".

I though that would be an important supporting statement.

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Mwendwa Kivuva, Nairobi, Kenya

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higher ground in that lifetime." - Maxwell Anderson


On 10 August 2015 at 16:41, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

> Many thanks Andrei.
>
> It looks very good and I added some edits, mainly for a better clarifity.
>
> Continue to welcome feedback from other CRISP Team members.
>
> Izumi
>
> On 2015/08/06 23:13, Andrei Robachevsky wrote:
> > HI,
> >
> > I tried to incorporate comments from Nurani and Izumi (thanks!). Here is
> > the updated version, redlined.
> >
> > It might be useful to use this document with tracking enabled to submit
> > additional suggestions/amendments.
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Andrei
> >
> >
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