[CRISP-TEAM] Actions

Wed Aug 19 15:54:20 CEST 2015

Hi all,

Thank you so much for putting this together Michael.

As a general comment, when reading this again (including my contribution), I feel that our response might be a little bit too limited in scope, as it is almost only commenting on our own proposal. 

While we agreed to have a number community perspective, as this is the only one we can claim to represent, I feel that we may want to at least add some general comments about the combined proposal or the transition process. 

I believe we all feel that we can endorse the general direction of the proposal and that we can express stronger support of the ICG and the transition. We all know that it is important that the transition gets explicit support from the community in the coming months. 

I will try to see if I can propose language for this, but would very much also welcome comments or text suggestions from others in the team.

Another possible addition could be to use some of the excellent points that ISOC make in its paper about the IANA Stewardship transition principles:

https://www.internetsociety.org/sites/default/files/IANA-Transition-Perspectives-20150728-en.pdf

They do not answer the evaluation questions from the ICG, but they explain why the NTIA criteria are really ingrained in the Internet and principles that the technical community hold. 

Any other thoughts on this?

Nurani

> On 19 aug 2015, at 14:40, Michael Abejuela <mabejuela at arin.net> wrote:
> 
> Hello CRISP Team,
> 
> I hope you are all well.  As requested, please find attached a document
> compiling the responses to the ICG call for comment drafted by various
> members of the team.  I have endeavored to compile the comments and have
> made some edits for clarification, consistency, grammar, etc.  None of the
> edits were meant to change any of the substance of the comments received
> thus far; however, I do ask the CRISP Team, particularly the authors of
> the various responses, to review and confirm that the intent of the
> responses is accurately reflected in this document.  Please comment on
> this mailing list if there are any questions or desired edits.
> 
> Thanks,
> -Michael
> 
> 
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> On 8/17/15, 12:37 PM, "Izumi Okutani" <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
> 
>> CRISP Team,
>> 
>> 
>> For the response to the ICG, please share your feedback within 24 hours
>> after Michael has compiled the responses,
>> 
>> I encourage you call to take a good look, whether it flows well overall
>> and gives supportive enough message to the ICG and our process, once the
>> combined response is circulate from Michael.
>> (I will do the same)
>> 
>> 
>> Michael,
>> 
>>>   Q.1-4  : https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002146.html
>>>   Q.5-6  : https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002147.html
>>>   Q.7-9  : https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002158.html
>>>   Q.10-12: https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002159.html
>> 
>> These are the responses, which I think covers all questions from the ICG.
>> Please let me know if there is anything you'd like to confirm for your
>> work  - thanks for volunteering as always!
>> 
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> Izumi
>> 
>> On 2015/08/13 19:11, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>>> CRISP Team,
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Please see the actions needed and share your feedback.
>>> 
>>> I know we have a lot on our plate during the holiday season, but your
>>> feedback is important as we are entering into coordination phase in
>>> finalising the proposal.
>>> 
>>> ---
>>> 1. Comment on the CRISP Team revised charter [Thu 13th Aug, UTC 13:00]
>>>   https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002162.html
>>> 
>>>   Fix by    : Fri 14th Aug and send to the NRO EC
>>> 
>>> ---
>>> 2. Observation on Sidley's IPR memo [Fri 14th Aug COB]
>>>   https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002157.html
>>> 
>>>   Share with CWG Chairs : Mon 17th Aug (Izumi & Nurani)
>>> 
>>> ---
>>> 3. Comment on ICG proposal [Fri 14th Aug] COB]
>>>   Q.1-4  : https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002146.html
>>>   Q.5-6  : https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002147.html
>>>   Q.7-9  : https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002158.html
>>>   Q.10-12: https://www.nro.net/pipermail/crisp/2015-August/002159.html
>>> 
>>>   Compile                   : Mon 17th Aug (Michael)
>>>   Share on ianaxfer at nro.net : Mon 17th or Tue 18th Aug (Depending on
>>> CRISP feedback) (Izumi & Nurani)
>>> 
>>> ---
>>> 4. SLA ver.3 [Feeback online: Mon 24th Aug]
>>>    SLA ver.2                : https://www.nro.net/sla
>>> (Clean)
>>>                               https://www.nro.net/sla-track-changes
>>> (Redline)
>>>    Responses to SLA feedback: https://www.nro.net/sla-comments
>>> 
>>>   Discuss at CRISP call     : Wed 26th Aug
>>>   Finalize                  : Fri 28th Aug
>>>   Submit                    : Mon 31st Aug (deadline: UTC23:59)
>>> --- 
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> Izumi
>>> 
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