[CRISP-TEAM] Draft response Q1-4

[Izumi Okutani]

Many thanks Andrei.

It looks very good and I added some edits, mainly for a better clarifity.

Continue to welcome feedback from other CRISP Team members.

Izumi

On 2015/08/06 23:13, Andrei Robachevsky wrote:
> HI,
> 
> I tried to incorporate comments from Nurani and Izumi (thanks!). Here is
> the updated version, redlined.
> 
> It might be useful to use this document with tracking enabled to submit
> additional suggestions/amendments.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Andrei
> 
> 
> 
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