[CRISP-TEAM] Updated proposal draft - reordering answers edit

[Izumi Okutani]

Dear German,


Thank you for posting the edited version on the NRO Website.
Sure and noted about the word version, for you to add text.


Michael,
Would you mind to send the word versions to German for :

 - the first draft (published on 19th Dec), and
 - the edited version


Thanks,
Izumi

On 2014/12/28 0:47, German Valdez wrote:
> Dear Izumi
> 
> url to the edited version is at
> 
> www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1<http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
> 
> Again, I'd need access to word versions to add text at the start of previous documents to establish the track of changes.
> 
> regards
> 
> German
> 
> 
> 
> On 25 Dec 2014, at 3:22 pm, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp<mailto:izumi at nic.ad.jp>> wrote:
> 
> Thank you so much Michael, for relecting the additional change as well.
> 
> It looks good and since I see no other comments, let's post this on the
> NRO website as version 1.1.
> 
> German, I'd appreciate it if you could help us post this draft.
> We can number the 1st draft published on 12/19 as version 1.0.
> 
> As suggested by Alan at the 5th call, I think it really helps to
> seperate "meeting materials" and "official CRISP documents/information".
> 
> I'll make a seperate thread for preparing the announcement for edited
> version.
> 
> 
> Izumi
> 
> (2014/12/24 21:49), Michael Abejuela wrote:
> Thank you Izumi,
> 
> Attached is the updated draft proposal reflecting the change you
> identified.  Both a redline and clean version is attached.  Please let me
> know if you or any other members of the team have any questions.
> 
> Sincerely,
> -Michael
> 
> 
> 
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