[CRISP-TEAM] Updated proposal draft - reordering answers edit

[German Valdez]

Dear Izumi

url to the edited version is at

www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1<http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>

Again, I'd need access to word versions to add text at the start of previous documents to establish the track of changes.

regards

German



On 25 Dec 2014, at 3:22 pm, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp<mailto:izumi at nic.ad.jp>> wrote:

Thank you so much Michael, for relecting the additional change as well.

It looks good and since I see no other comments, let's post this on the
NRO website as version 1.1.

German, I'd appreciate it if you could help us post this draft.
We can number the 1st draft published on 12/19 as version 1.0.

As suggested by Alan at the 5th call, I think it really helps to
seperate "meeting materials" and "official CRISP documents/information".

I'll make a seperate thread for preparing the announcement for edited
version.


Izumi

(2014/12/24 21:49), Michael Abejuela wrote:
Thank you Izumi,

Attached is the updated draft proposal reflecting the change you
identified.  Both a redline and clean version is attached.  Please let me
know if you or any other members of the team have any questions.

Sincerely,
-Michael



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