[CRISP-TEAM] Announcement for the edited version_ ver.2

[Mwendwa Kivuva]

I also support

On 25/12/2014, Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:
> On Thu, 25 Dec 2014, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>> I felt the intention of the editorial changes ("to clarify our
>> answers to RFP") is still valid and may be worth mentioning, so
>> I added the second sentence in your suggested text, starting
>> from "Some small" and kept the original sentence from my draft
>> for the first sentence for now.
>
> That's fine.  I support your revised version below.
>
>> The editorial changes are intended to clarify our answers to
>> RFP, by re-ordering answers in the same order as questions
>> listed in each Section. Some small additions have been made
>> to address points that had not been answered in the earlier
>> draft. Finally, there are some changes made for stylistic
>> reasons.
>
> --apb (Alan Barrett)
>
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