[CRISP-TEAM] Announcement for the edited version

[Alan Barrett]

On Thu, 25 Dec 2014, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>This is a draft announcement once the edited version 1.1 is posted on
>NRO website.

Thank you.  I have just one comment:

>The editorial changes are intended to clarify our answers to RFP, by
>re-ordering answers in the same order as questions listed in each Section.

There are also other changes unrelated to ordering, such as in the 
treatment of acronyms, and there are minor additions to correct 
issues that were noticed during the re-ordering process.  To 
encompass all this, I suggest the following text:

    Most of the editorial changes are intended to clarify our answers
    to the RFP, by re-ordering answers in the same order as questions
    listed in each Section.  Some small additions have been made to
    address points that had not been answered in the earlier draft.
    Finally, there are some changes made for stylistic reasons.

--apb (Alan Barrett)