[CRISP-TEAM] Announcement for the edited version
apb at cequrux.com
Thu Dec 25 09:10:10 CET 2014
On Thu, 25 Dec 2014, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>This is a draft announcement once the edited version 1.1 is posted on
Thank you. I have just one comment:
>The editorial changes are intended to clarify our answers to RFP, by
>re-ordering answers in the same order as questions listed in each Section.
There are also other changes unrelated to ordering, such as in the
treatment of acronyms, and there are minor additions to correct
issues that were noticed during the re-ordering process. To
encompass all this, I suggest the following text:
Most of the editorial changes are intended to clarify our answers
to the RFP, by re-ordering answers in the same order as questions
listed in each Section. Some small additions have been made to
address points that had not been answered in the earlier draft.
Finally, there are some changes made for stylistic reasons.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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