[CRISP-TEAM] Announcement for the edited version

[Izumi Okutani]

CRISP Team,


This is a draft announcement once the edited version 1.1 is posted on
NRO website.

I welcome feedback until UTC6:00am Fri 26th Dec.

Izumi

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Subject: Editorial version of Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship
Proposal published
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Dear Colleagues,


CRISP Team has published an editorial version of the the Internet
numbers community's response to the Request For Proposals issued by the
IANA Stewardship Coordination Group (ICG):

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>From the initial draft we published on 19th Dec [*], we have made
editorial changes only. No changes are made in contents of the proposal.

[*]
https://www.nro.net/wp-content/uploads/CRISP-IANA-PROPOSAL-First-Draft1.pdf

The editorial changes are intended to clarify our answers to RFP, by
re-ordering answers in the same order as questions listed in each Section.

The deadline of the comments to be submitted to <ianaxfer at nro.net>
mailing list remains the same: Monday 5th Jan 2015.

Please let us know if you have any questions about version 1.1 of our
draft proposal, and we continue to welcome feecback from the community.


Best Regards,
Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal Team (CRISP Team)
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