[CRISP-TEAM] Section V NTIA Requirements Re: Updated proposal draft - reordering answers edit

[Izumi Okutani]

Thanks Nurani, John for your feedback.

I'd like to ask for volunteer to lead about this issue.
Anyone willing to work on this?

I'm willing to follow up as well but I won't be able give enough time to
focus only on this topic, given there are other feedbacks received/to be
received for the proposal.


Izumi

(2014/12/23 23:15), Sweeting, John wrote:
> I agree as well, work on it for second draft
> 
> 
> 
> On 12/23/14, 7:59 AM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
> 
>> I agree with your comment Izumi. Let's look at how we can strengthen this
>> section for the second draft.
>>
>> Kind regards,
>>
>> Nurani
>>
>>
>>> On 23 dec 2014, at 12:04, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>>
>>> I wonder if we feel we have properly answered Section "V. NTIA
>>> Requirement".
>>>
>>> I feel this section is a little weak, even though it is very important
>>> we explain we meet the criteria set by NTIA.
>>>
>>> This is beyond editorial review, so let's leave it as it is when
>>> publishing edited version, but we should address it for the 2nd draft.
>>>
>>> What do you think, CRISP Team?
>>>
>>>
>>> Izumi
>>>
>>> (2014/12/23 5:13), Michael Abejuela wrote:
>>>> Hello Everyone,
>>>>
>>>> Please find attached the updated proposal draft as discussed during
>>>> the conference call earlier today.  You will observe both a redline
>>>> version highlighting the changes proposed by myself, Izumi and Alan.
>>>> In addition, a clean version is attached for ease of review that
>>>> includes minor formatting changes.
>>>>
>>>> Please let me know if you have any questions.  Izumi and Alan, I trust
>>>> I was able to capture all of your edits but please review and let me
>>>> know if I have missed any.  I look forward to the team���s comments.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> -Michael
>>>>
>>>> --
>>>> Michael R. Abejuela
>>>> Associate General Counsel
>>>> ARIN
>>>> 3635 Concorde Parkway
>>>> Suite 200
>>>> Chantilly, VA 20151
>>>> (703) 227-9875 (p)
>>>> (703) 263-0111 (f)
>>>> mabejuela at arin.net<mailto:mabejuela at arin.net>
>>>>
>>>> Confidentiality Notice: This e-mail message, including any
>>>> attachments, is for the sole use of the intended recipient(s) and may
>>>> contain confidential and privileged information.  Any unauthorized
>>>> review, copy, use, disclosure, or distribution is prohibited.   If you
>>>> are not the intended recipient, please contact the sender by reply
>>>> e-mail and destroy all copies of the original message.
>>>
>>>
>>> _______________________________________________
>>> CRISP mailing list
>>> CRISP at nro.net
>>> https://www.nro.net/mailman/listinfo/crisp
>>
>> _______________________________________________
>> CRISP mailing list
>> CRISP at nro.net
>> https://www.nro.net/mailman/listinfo/crisp
> 
> 
> This E-mail and any of its attachments may contain Time Warner Cable proprietary information, which is privileged, confidential, or subject to copyright belonging to Time Warner Cable. This E-mail is intended solely for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed. If you are not the intended recipient of this E-mail, you are hereby notified that any dissemination, distribution, copying, or action taken in relation to the contents of and attachments to this E-mail is strictly prohibited and may be unlawful. If you have received this E-mail in error, please notify the sender immediately and permanently delete the original and any copy of this E-mail and any printout.
>