[CRISP-TEAM] Section V NTIA Requirements Re: Updated proposal draft - reordering answers edit

[Sweeting, John]

I agree as well, work on it for second draft



On 12/23/14, 7:59 AM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:

>I agree with your comment Izumi. Let's look at how we can strengthen this
>section for the second draft.
>
>Kind regards,
>
>Nurani
>
>
>> On 23 dec 2014, at 12:04, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>
>> I wonder if we feel we have properly answered Section "V. NTIA
>>Requirement".
>>
>> I feel this section is a little weak, even though it is very important
>>we explain we meet the criteria set by NTIA.
>>
>> This is beyond editorial review, so let's leave it as it is when
>>publishing edited version, but we should address it for the 2nd draft.
>>
>> What do you think, CRISP Team?
>>
>>
>> Izumi
>>
>> (2014/12/23 5:13), Michael Abejuela wrote:
>>> Hello Everyone,
>>>
>>> Please find attached the updated proposal draft as discussed during
>>>the conference call earlier today.  You will observe both a redline
>>>version highlighting the changes proposed by myself, Izumi and Alan.
>>>In addition, a clean version is attached for ease of review that
>>>includes minor formatting changes.
>>>
>>> Please let me know if you have any questions.  Izumi and Alan, I trust
>>>I was able to capture all of your edits but please review and let me
>>>know if I have missed any.  I look forward to the team�s comments.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>> -Michael
>>>
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