[CRISP-TEAM] Updated Draft Proposal

[Izumi Okutani]

Thank you German!!

Izumi

(2014/12/19 13:26), German Valdez wrote:
> I changed the url  https://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft so it's now accesing this very last version.
> 
> Regards
> 
> German
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>> On 19 Dec 2014, at 2:11 pm, Michael Abejuela <mabejuela at arin.net> wrote:
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>> Hi Izumi,
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>> Yes you are correct, there was one sentence that should be deleted.
>> Attached are the updated versions of the proposal with that deletion.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> -Michael
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>> On 12/18/14, 10:25 PM, "Izumi Okutani" <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
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>>> Michael,
>>>
>>>
>>> Thank you very much for the updated draft.
>>>
>>> I want to confirm one thing -
>>> I think this part needs deleting.
>>>
>>> Reason: It is a part of the paragrah which talks about gPDP, and we are
>>> not proposing anything related to this.
>>> ---
>>> The processes for developing, agreeing and implementing policy relating
>>> to management of the global Internet number resource pools would require
>>> only one change to accommodate this new arrangement. The text in
>>> "Attachment A" of the ICANN ASO MoU meets the current and
>>> anticipated requirements for a community-driven global policy
>>> development process;
>>> ---
>>>
>>> If you are still online, may I ask for your help to update (delete) this
>>> part?
>>>
>>> If not, I'll make an announcement as it is, with a note saying we are
>>> considering to delete this part.
>>>
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>> Izumi
>>>
>>>
>>> (2014/12/19 8:33), Michael Abejuela wrote:
>>>> Hello CRISP Team,
>>>>
>>>> It was a pleasure speaking with all of you earlier today.  Please find
>>>> attached an updated version of our draft proposal (both redline and
>>>> clean versions) wherein you will observe the following:
>>>>
>>>> (1) The suggested revised text on overlap reflecting both Andrei and
>>>> Alan���s comments (page 1-2);
>>>> (2) Hearing no other comments on Nico���s desired edit, the paragraph
>>>> regarding establishment of a Review Committee now reads ���The NRO
>>>> Executive Council shall establish a Review Committee��� (page 8); and
>>>> (3) The language referencing the proposal to amend the ASO MOU has been
>>>> removed entirely (page 8-9).
>>>>
>>>> I believe this captures the desired edits from our most recent
>>>> discussions, but please review and let me know if there are any
>>>> additional issues or something I may have missed.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> -Michael
>>>>
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>>>> Associate General Counsel
>>>> ARIN
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