[CRISP-TEAM] Updated Draft Proposal

[German Valdez]

I changed the url  https://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft so it's now accesing this very last version.

Regards

German


> On 19 Dec 2014, at 2:11 pm, Michael Abejuela <mabejuela at arin.net> wrote:
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> Hi Izumi,
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> Yes you are correct, there was one sentence that should be deleted.
> Attached are the updated versions of the proposal with that deletion.
> 
> Thanks,
> -Michael
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> On 12/18/14, 10:25 PM, "Izumi Okutani" <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
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>> Michael,
>> 
>> 
>> Thank you very much for the updated draft.
>> 
>> I want to confirm one thing -
>> I think this part needs deleting.
>> 
>> Reason: It is a part of the paragrah which talks about gPDP, and we are
>> not proposing anything related to this.
>> ---
>> The processes for developing, agreeing and implementing policy relating
>> to management of the global Internet number resource pools would require
>> only one change to accommodate this new arrangement. The text in
>> "Attachment A" of the ICANN ASO MoU meets the current and
>> anticipated requirements for a community-driven global policy
>> development process;
>> ---
>> 
>> If you are still online, may I ask for your help to update (delete) this
>> part?
>> 
>> If not, I'll make an announcement as it is, with a note saying we are
>> considering to delete this part.
>> 
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Izumi
>> 
>> 
>> (2014/12/19 8:33), Michael Abejuela wrote:
>>> Hello CRISP Team,
>>> 
>>> It was a pleasure speaking with all of you earlier today.  Please find
>>> attached an updated version of our draft proposal (both redline and
>>> clean versions) wherein you will observe the following:
>>> 
>>> (1) The suggested revised text on overlap reflecting both Andrei and
>>> Alan�s comments (page 1-2);
>>> (2) Hearing no other comments on Nico�s desired edit, the paragraph
>>> regarding establishment of a Review Committee now reads �The NRO
>>> Executive Council shall establish a Review Committee� (page 8); and
>>> (3) The language referencing the proposal to amend the ASO MOU has been
>>> removed entirely (page 8-9).
>>> 
>>> I believe this captures the desired edits from our most recent
>>> discussions, but please review and let me know if there are any
>>> additional issues or something I may have missed.
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> -Michael
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