[CRISP-TEAM] Updated Draft Proposal

[Michael Abejuela]

Hi Izumi,

Yes you are correct, there was one sentence that should be deleted.
Attached are the updated versions of the proposal with that deletion.

Thanks,
-Michael

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On 12/18/14, 10:25 PM, "Izumi Okutani" <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

>Michael,
>
>
>Thank you very much for the updated draft.
>
>I want to confirm one thing -
>I think this part needs deleting.
>
>Reason: It is a part of the paragrah which talks about gPDP, and we are
>not proposing anything related to this.
>---
>The processes for developing, agreeing and implementing policy relating
>to management of the global Internet number resource pools would require
>only one change to accommodate this new arrangement. The text in
>"Attachment A" of the ICANN ASO MoU meets the current and
>anticipated requirements for a community-driven global policy
>development process;
>---
>
>If you are still online, may I ask for your help to update (delete) this
>part?
>
>If not, I'll make an announcement as it is, with a note saying we are
>considering to delete this part.
>
>
>Thanks,
>Izumi
>
>
>(2014/12/19 8:33), Michael Abejuela wrote:
>> Hello CRISP Team,
>>
>> It was a pleasure speaking with all of you earlier today.  Please find
>>attached an updated version of our draft proposal (both redline and
>>clean versions) wherein you will observe the following:
>>
>> (1) The suggested revised text on overlap reflecting both Andrei and
>>Alan�s comments (page 1-2);
>> (2) Hearing no other comments on Nico�s desired edit, the paragraph
>>regarding establishment of a Review Committee now reads �The NRO
>>Executive Council shall establish a Review Committee� (page 8); and
>> (3) The language referencing the proposal to amend the ASO MOU has been
>>removed entirely (page 8-9).
>>
>> I believe this captures the desired edits from our most recent
>>discussions, but please review and let me know if there are any
>>additional issues or something I may have missed.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> -Michael
>>
>>
>> --
>> Michael R. Abejuela
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>> ARIN
>> 3635 Concorde Parkway
>> Suite 200
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>> (703) 263-0111 (f)
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