[CRISP-TEAM] Updated Draft Proposal

[Izumi Okutani]

Michael,


Thank you very much for the updated draft.

I want to confirm one thing -
I think this part needs deleting.

Reason: It is a part of the paragrah which talks about gPDP, and we are 
not proposing anything related to this.
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The processes for developing, agreeing and implementing policy relating 
to management of the global Internet number resource pools would require 
only one change to accommodate this new arrangement. The text in 
"Attachment A" of the ICANN ASO MoU meets the current and
anticipated requirements for a community-driven global policy 
development process;
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If you are still online, may I ask for your help to update (delete) this 
part?

If not, I'll make an announcement as it is, with a note saying we are 
considering to delete this part.


Thanks,
Izumi


(2014/12/19 8:33), Michael Abejuela wrote:
> Hello CRISP Team,
>
> It was a pleasure speaking with all of you earlier today.  Please find attached an updated version of our draft proposal (both redline and clean versions) wherein you will observe the following:
>
> (1) The suggested revised text on overlap reflecting both Andrei and Alan�s comments (page 1-2);
> (2) Hearing no other comments on Nico�s desired edit, the paragraph regarding establishment of a Review Committee now reads �The NRO Executive Council shall establish a Review Committee� (page 8); and
> (3) The language referencing the proposal to amend the ASO MOU has been removed entirely (page 8-9).
>
> I believe this captures the desired edits from our most recent discussions, but please review and let me know if there are any additional issues or something I may have missed.
>
> Thanks,
> -Michael
>
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