[CRISP-TEAM] Final call for comments: before UTC3 (Re: Draft announcement for first draft proposal from CRISP Team)

[German Valdez]

Thanks Izumi

I think you are the right person to send the email.  

Cheers

German



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> On 19 Dec 2014, at 12:39 pm, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
> 
> Thank you German for the URL
> Yes, that's what I have in mind - send the announcement from me.
> 
> (While I don't have a strong preference)
> 
> I'm still catching up with e-mails but unless I find issues
> I'll send the announcement out soon as planned, at UTC4:00.
> 
> Regards,
> Izumi
> 
> (2014/12/19 9:01), German Valdez wrote:
>> Hi Izumi
>> Some short URL
>> for the announcement
>> Draft proposal URL
>> https://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft <https://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft>
>> The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region
>> https://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement <https://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
>> As CRISP Team chair,  I assume you���ll send the announcement in the global list, right ?
>> Regards
>> German
>>> On 19 Dec 2014, at 12:36 am, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Dear Colleagues,
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Please confirm the announcement and let me know before UTC3, if you have
>>> any feedbacks.
>>> 
>>> 2 Changes from the last version:
>>>  - Added "Other note about the draft"
>>>    We'll work on editing to make our answers in same order as questions
>>>  - Removed link to "Summary of RIR proposals"
>>>    (the current version doesn't reflect the latest changes)
>>> 
>>> I mentioned at the call to announce 12 hours from now but I have a
>>> meeting during that time, so delayed the time a little bit.
>>> Let me know if anyone has concerns about this.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Regards,
>>> Izumi
>>> 
>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>> Subject: Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: First Draft
>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>> 
>>> Dear colleagues,
>>> 
>>> Please find the first draft of the Internet numbers community's response
>>> to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship Coordination
>>> Group (ICG). This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA
>>> Stewardship Proposal (CRISP) team, and we are now seeking feedback on
>>> this draft from the global community.
>>> 
>>> The next CRISP team teleconference will be held on Monday 22 December at
>>> 13:00 UTC. Details on how to join as an observer will be posted to this
>>> list.
>>> 
>>> Draft proposal: #### URL ####
>>> The deadline for providing feedback: 5 January 2015
>>> Feedback should be sent to : <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list
>>> 
>>> Key points:
>>>  - ICANN to continue as an operator of the IANA function:
>>>  - Agreement: Exchange SLA with ICANN as the IANA function
>>>               operator on number resources
>>>  - Review Committee with representatives from each RIR region
>>> 
>>> Other note about the draft:
>>>    CRISP Team continues work on editing, to have our answers
>>>    in the same order as questions listed in each section.
>>>    This will be reflected in the second draft.
>>> 
>>> Key dates:
>>>   First draft published:            19 Dec 2014
>>>   First draft comments close:        5 Jan 2015
>>>   Second draft to be published:      8 Jan 2015
>>>   Second draft comments close:      12 Jan 2015
>>>   Final proposal to be sent to ICG: 15 Jan 2015
>>> 
>>> How to engage in discussions:
>>>  All global discussions, for CRISP team to consider as community
>>>  feedback, will be conducted at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>>>  All CRISP team discussions are open to observers.
>>> 
>>> References:
>>> ------------
>>> * Discussions by CRISP Team
>>>  - Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>>>    minutes and agendas of all CRISP teleconferences and a public
>>>    archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are available at:
>>>    https://nro.net/crisp-team
>>> 
>>> * Other links:
>>>  - ICG request for proposals:
>>>   <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
>>> 
>>>  - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
>>> <https://www.nro.net/nro-and-internet-governance/iana-oversight/timeline-for-rirs-engagement-in-iana-stewardship-transition-process>
>>> 
>>> _______________________________________________
>>> CRISP mailing list
>>> CRISP at nro.net
>>> https://www.nro.net/mailman/listinfo/crisp
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