[CRISP-TEAM] Suggested text: Review Commitee

[Izumi Okutani]

Thank you very much Michael and Andres. Great to know that you have been
working on the text. I agree, Anres, hard to describe the concept
properly in a few sentences.

I haven't had time to take a look but looking forward to talking to you
all shortly.

Izumi

(2014/12/18 21:39), Michael Abejuela wrote:
> Hello Izumi and rest of the CRISP Team,
> 
> For the groups review and comment, please find attached a clean and
> redline version of the updated draft proposal.  In this version, you will
> observe inclusion of revisions to the language regarding the issue of
> ICANN Board ratification that was discussed yesterday.  As you all saw, I
> proposed initial language; and based on helpful feedback from Bill and
> Alan, I updated the language as you will see in this draft.
> 
> In addition, Izumi was kind enough to propose language on the Review
> Committee issue which I have also discussed with Andres and in this draft,
> you will observe a slight update to Izumi�s initial proposed language.  I
> tried to capture the nature of the comments as well as make it in line
> with the rest of the proposal language.
> 
> Please let me know if I have missed anything or if there are any desired
> edits.  I assume there will be substantive discussion of these edits on
> the call today.
> 
> Sincerely,
> -Michael
>