[CRISP-TEAM] Suggested text: Review Commitee

[Andres Piazza]

Dear Izumi,

Thanks for this. It was hard to summarize the idea in one paragraph and 
other commmitements did not allow me to answer earlier.

I touched base with your language and also had a really helpful imput 
from Michael.

Here I go:

El 12/18/14 8:27 AM, Izumi Okutani escribió:
> CRISP Team,
>
>
> Since we are a few hours from the call, this is my suggested text for
> the part which describes Review Commitee.
>
> If there is another text being worked on and can be shared, please post
> it here. We can disregard my version then.
>
> I very much welcome your feeback from the team.
>
>
> Michael,
> As usual, *if* not other suggested text comes out before the meeting
> I'd appreciate it if you could incorporate this and any feedback we get
> on the list before the call, in the updated draft proposal.
>
> If suggested text is shared on the list before the call, please reflect
> that, and not my version.
>
>
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> (To be inserterted afer 2nd paragraph on SLA of Section III)

To ensure the service level defined in the proposed contract is 
maintained and provided by the IANA functions operator, the NRO 
Executive Council will conduct periodic reviews of the service level of 
the IANA number resource functions that serves each RIR and their 
respective communities. The NRO Executive Council may establish a Review 
Committee that will advise and assist the NRO Executive Council in its 
periodic review. Any such Review Committee should be a team composed of 
representatives from each RIR region that will, as needed, undertake a 
review of the level of service received from the IANA functions operator 
and report to the NRO Executive Council any concerns regarding any 
observed failure by the IANA functions operator to meet its contractual 
obligations under the proposed contract. Any such Review Committee will 
advise the NRO Executive Council in its capacity solely to oversee the 
performance of the IANA number resource functions and the Review 
Committee’s advice and comment will be limited to the processes followed 
in the IANA functions operator’s performance under the proposed contract.

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Regards,

Andrés