[CRISP-TEAM] the initial draft announcement

[Paul Rendek]

Hello All,

Thanks Craig for updating this document. I think it provides general
reflection of the current status. I only have a few comments and
suggestions on the document.

The table of proposals the column for ARIN includes a point to 'Reaffirm
commitments'. It is not clear what commitments this point makes
reference to. Is is reaffirming commitment to the IANA operator? I am
not sure this is necessary as there will be a new contract here. Is it
reaffirming commitments to the IETF or another body? If so, I think that
needs to be clearly stated in the notes below the table.

Under the section 'Accommodating the differences' you make reference to
the NRO entering into a contract with the IANA operator. I would like to
suggest to remove reference to the NRO as it will be the 5 RIRs entering
into a contract with the IANA operator. This is a small but very
important distinction. The NRO is not an incorporated entity and is not
in a position to enter into such a legal contract.

In the summary, point 3 makes reference to the NRO convening a 'broad
based community body'. I think the words broad based is a new term and
possibly superfluous in this context. I think a 'community body'
encompasses a broad based approach and is a term that is well understood
and agreed in RIR community workings. Please also note that it will be
the RIRs that would convene such a body.

I hope that these suggestions can be incorportated into this document.

Thanks and I look forward to our teleconference call today.

Regards,
Paul




On 12/17/14 12:17 AM, Craig Ng wrote:
> The updated document is attached. It now incorporate ARIN's proposals (and
> AFRINIC's, as requested by Ernest) in the chart. You will note, of course,
> that the ARIN's proposal was originally described in the body of the
> document (under the heading "Accommodating the differences").
>
> If you have no objection to this, then I will ask German to replace the
> current document on the NRO website with this one.
>
> Craig
>
>
>
> On 17/12/2014 10:06 am, "Craig Ng" <craig at apnic.net> wrote:
>
>> On 17/12/2014 8:50 am, "Izumi Okutani" <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>
>>> Thanks John very much for letting me know.
>>>
>>>> Is it possible to edit and correct the summary? ARIN?s proposal dated
>>>> 21
>>>> November 2014 was published to ARIN?s transition list and made
>>>> available
>>>> on the NRO-IANAXFER list on November 28 yet this summary does not
>>>> mention
>>>> it nor does it compare it in the chart.
>>> Let's make sure to reflect the summary which includes ARIN community.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Craig,
>>> may I confirm whether you are happy to work on this revision, or prefer
>>> someone from ARIN region to edit the updated version on this summary?
>>>
>> Hi John, Izumi
>>
>> Yes, I am happy to edit the document. Apologies for not capturing ARIN's
>> proposal. I intend to make a post-script edit to the document, and
>> circulate it to make sure you're happy with it.
>>
>> Thanks
>> Craig
>
>
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