[CRISP-TEAM] Checking points before initial draft publish

[Alan Barrett]

On Wed, 17 Dec 2014, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>While waiting for revised draft, I would like to proceed in parallel 
>to prepare for final checking before we share the initial draft.
>
>Alan, I wonder if you would be able to help me in double checking, on 
>the points we should cover in the draft?
>
>Feedback from other members of the CRISP team would be very welcome as 
>well ofcourse.

Throughout our response, it may be useful to change the order of 
paragraphs or sentences to better match the order of bullet points 
in the ICG request.

In section I, the interdependency with the IETF is broader than 
just the special purpose values.  The IETF defines the entirety of 
the number spaces, including portions for special use, portions 
for ordinary use, and portions reserved for future use.  Only the 
"ordinary" portions of the address space are handled by the RIRs.

--apb (Alan Barrett)